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FIC: Torchwood (drabble) - Brat

Feb 16, 2009 00:39

Title: Brat
Author: fajrdrako
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack/John, the Torchwood team
Challenge: tw100, challenge: children
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: Cross-posted to my lj and to tw100.

( Brat )

captain john hart, drabble, my_fic, tw100, captain jack harkness, torchwood

Comments 31

devohoneybee February 16 2009, 05:45:50 UTC

hee! perfect. loved Gwen not looking up. *s*

fajrdrako February 16 2009, 05:53:20 UTC

Thank you.

loved Gwen not looking up.

She knows what she's dealing with, poor woman.

star_momma February 16 2009, 21:43:21 UTC

hehe Mom's gonna give someone a spanking... and I can't blame her wanting to ;)

fajrdrako February 17 2009, 04:26:13 UTC

So very true!

Thanks for commenting.

darthhellokitty February 16 2009, 05:58:40 UTC

And Ianto just rolls his eyes; he knows better than to take this seriously.

fajrdrako February 16 2009, 06:07:01 UTC

Oh, yes - clever Ianto knows exactly what it's worth.

51stcenturyfox February 16 2009, 06:01:13 UTC

Brilliant! And the last line killed me.

Gwen... is clearly fed up.

fajrdrako February 16 2009, 06:07:43 UTC

Thanks for the nice comments.

Gwen... is clearly fed up.

Can you blame her?

51stcenturyfox February 16 2009, 06:50:49 UTC

Not in the least!

order_of_chaos February 16 2009, 06:53:58 UTC

I so want this to be canon.

Love the last two lines especially.

fajrdrako February 16 2009, 13:28:32 UTC

Thank you. I wish it would be canon. I want more about Captain John. I really do.

jackarono February 17 2009, 01:05:13 UTC

I so want him to work at Torchwood. Freelance. I mean, the minute he starts worrying about his pension, he's lost me. :)

fajrdrako February 17 2009, 04:25:14 UTC

John's not going to worry about his pension. No fears. I want him with all his snarl, fizz and sparkle. There's no taming our Captain John!

aeron_lanart February 16 2009, 11:59:16 UTC

"You're a brat."

"Wear it like a badge. And it's bigger than yours, too.

Well that's John telling the truth for a change - he *is* a bigger brat. I love the reactions of the other two (or more specifically the lack thereof).
Hee!

fajrdrako February 16 2009, 13:26:30 UTC

So glad you enjoyed!

I find John an infinite source of entertainment.