Fiction excerpt
As promised, what folllows is an excerpt from my newly begun work of fiction. It's a romance novel, about two women. If you're not into that, then stay away. ;)
The working title is "With the Wind." Below are the first and second chapters, downloadable in Word (.doc) format. Any and all feedback, especially constructive criticism, is appreciated.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
The working title is "With the Wind." Below are the first and second chapters, downloadable in Word (.doc) format. Any and all feedback, especially constructive criticism, is appreciated.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2