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Jan 29, 2010 21:51

Scene, a lake in an underground cavern, separated from the gap by a narrow shore. In the center of the lake, there is something like a white branch, or a great ivory tusk, or the silhouette of a swan's neck. On it stands Princess Kraehe, in black tulle and satin ( Read more... )

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theladyrue February 14 2010, 17:28:16 UTC
Kraehe stands above the prince, facing them.

"When our whispers are full of emotion," Kraehe says, tilting her head down so she can see Tutu better, "whose words will he be pulled to? If the prince chooses you, Tutu, I will return him and this piece," she uncrosses her arms, tilting the heartshard slightly so it catches the light, "to you."

She stops, and looks concerned, voice taking on the caring-mocking tone she has heard so often at Gold Crown Academy. "But...even if I would like to return it, you'd be nothing but a flash of light, would you?"

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reallyaduck March 4 2010, 04:41:42 UTC
Vanish . . .

Princess Tutu doesn't gulp. Duck would gulp. Princess Tutu is facing her destiny, and she does it with grace -

I'm going to vanish, really? That terrifies me . . .

Her eyes lower slightly, the only outward sign of uncertainty.

But -

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fairytaleknight March 4 2010, 04:59:21 UTC
Fakir, too, is facing his destiny.

He isn't uncertain any more. That's past. His enemy stands before him, and very soon now she'll finish her villainous monologue and the battle will begin.

Tutu won't need to vanish, if all goes well. Fakir will defeat Kraehe first, and die in the moment when he kills her, so that Mytho and Tutu can ... can ...

(Live happily ever after, supplies a voice from nowhere.)

Live happily ever after, that's right.

(You always have such good plans, Fakir.)

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theladyrue March 16 2010, 06:06:11 UTC
Kraehe laughs, quietly.

"If you truly love the prince, there is no reason to be confused...is there?"

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fairytaleknight June 4 2010, 05:22:52 UTC
Kraehe mocks Fakir. Tutu cries out. Fakir hardly hears them. Wagner's Prelude to Lohengrin is playing in his mind, all swooping brasses and stringsThe raven armies have come, descending from the roof of the cave in neat formation. Each raven carries an extended sword.

Should there be an observer in an armchair, somewhere behind the set, the observer might ask, "Why are those ravens en pointe? Why are they wearing tutus? Why do the raven armies even have human legs, anyhow?" The question doesn't interest Fakir, who is raising his sword in the first move of the Marozzi sequence--

No, Fakir isn't. He's spinning and pirouetting and swinging his sword in the old, familiar patterns of stage combat, and every time he slices at a raven, the raven vanishes in a spray of purple glitter.

Spoon would say, "You're dancing, son. Start over."

I can't start over.

Spin, turn, swing. Two ravens down, three.

I'm doing it all wrong, but it's working. Why can't I remember the moves?Fakir reaches backwards over his head, killing a fourth raven ( ... )

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reallyaduck August 25 2010, 05:19:23 UTC
"FAKIR!" Tutu shrieks, and leans forward over the swords of the raven guards. Why can't she move?

(The princess doesn't rescue the knight, silly duck.

The princess doesn't even rescue the prince.

The princess is not an agent; she's a tragedy.)

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fairytaleknight August 25 2010, 05:20:16 UTC
Fakir fights his way to the surface of the lake, gasping and coughing. I will not fail yet.

I will not fail at all.

A circle of ravens surrounds Fakir, slashing at him until the water is red with his blood. He strikes back, stepping forward with every strike, until at last Fakir reaches the island where Kraehe waits.

Fakir's bent over and can barely stand. His shirt's so torn that it hardly covers him. But he says, breathless, "Well..then. It looks like my body's still in one piece, huh?"

Fakir raises Lohengrin's sword for the last time.

Kraehe is saying something scornful, about how Fakir's too weak to be able to hurt her. Fakir only smiles, exhausted and triumphant. Oh, I have a better plan than that."Mytho," he gasps, "forgive me ( ... )

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