Fic: Listen

[fairymage]

Title: Listen
Author: fairymage
Rating: G
Community: 30_kisses
Theme: #17-kHz
Fandom: Card Captor Sakura
Pairing: Fujitaka/Nadeshiko

Romantic Notions

Comments

[claire_chan]

I never think about all the sounds accompanying daily life, this was a very interesting slice-of-life fic describing all of them. ^_^ I liked it! My favorite line was "It was a soothing and familiar symphony as he moved down aisles..."

Interesting also that you never mention Fujitaka nor Nadeshiko's name once throughout the fanfic.

[fairymage]

This was all born of the fact that I had absolutely no idea how to use the theme ^^ And thank you! I like to try different things with my short fics, just because experimenting is fun.

I didn't notice that until you mentioned it. But I guess I did that because the emphasis wasn't so much on names, only sounds. But that is kind of interesting, and it's not something I do very often (unintentionally, at least).

Thank you for reading!

[fairymage]

Awww, thanks! ^_^

[ex_butterfl246]

This was really good. The use of sounds was clever without ever being *too* clever. You conveyed Fujitaka's anticipation very well.

[fairymage]

Thank you very much! ^_^