three bags full (1/2)

[fahye]

Okay, look, it's ALMOST DONE, but I have been making noise about this for so long that I figure I may as well post the first half now. Besides, the bloody thing's going to be epically long, I don't want to overwhelm you all :D

This story is a one-day-early 21st birthday present for my favourite person in the universe. Enjoy, Cosmas.

Notes!

Comments

[nextian]

Oh, my heart. I'll hold off on details till part two. But oh my fucking heart.

[fahye]

WHAT NO DETAILS PLEASE

*grabby hands*

[pushingmetaphor]

asfaosgosdhs *DED OF JOY*

[fahye]

*DRAGS YOU BACK INTO THE LIVING* Don't die yet! More coming!

[platypusnoises]

reading eyaiverse makes me ache to create something of my own. (whether it's because you're brilliant or because everyone is always creating in eyaiverse, i don't know. it's probably both.)

eagerly anticipating part two!

[fahye]

Well, that's about as good a response as I could hope for :)

[schiarire]

WHAT DO YOU MEAN NOT LIVE UP TO THE HYPE. I HAVE GONE ALL TO PIECES HERE. ALSO I THINK I SEE MAI LINH??? WHATEVER TEE I HAPPEN TO BELIEVE SHE IS UNUSUALLY ATTRACTIVE EVEN FOR A ROBOT.

LINES:

His body vibrated as one of the Pipe trains shot past, sending little waves of influence all the way down to the lowest of the low: him

[fahye]

You do indeed see Mai Linh! And I agree with you! But she is not Tee's type at all.

That is an EXCELLENT combination of lines I wanted someone to notice and lines I am surprised at.

[schiarire]

Yes, that's fair. But also HILARIOUS.

[lilith_lessfair]

And, yea!!!!!

Um, yeah, so I'm little excited about this. Will have to hold off on a real comment because I'm performing and swamped.

But, in short, it's wonderful and I cannot wait to see more.

[fahye]

Thanks :)