Re: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASDFFGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHfahyeSeptember 6 2007, 22:39:45 UTC
Oh Lizzen. I am so awful. I kept waiting for the glimmer of hope to arrive, but because I was actually writing while identifying with the demon herself...that didn't happen. She just kept thinking, 'ha! you thought you'd be able to tolerate hell because you could spend all your time thinking about how Sam was safe because of you! THINK AGAIN, MATE!' and basically it all just collapsed into woe.
I did write this, though. It didn't fit with the rest of the ficlet, so I didn't post it, but...it could be part of a less-horrible sequel? I don't know.
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"Ooh," she breathes, and a smile breaks out on her face like she's just been handed an all-expenses-paid trip to go shoe shopping in Paris. Or whatever the fuck it is that makes demons smile. "Knock-knock."
"What?" you demand.
Her fingertips stroke down your cheek, and with the other hand she presses the piece of paper into your palm. "Raincheck, sweetheart," she says. "I've just got to take this call
( ... )
ps. I love that you identify with the demon (OMG ME TOOOOOOO) and it's hard to enjoy being a villainess when OMG. SAVE DEAN FROM HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLL.
Speaking of writing yourself into a hole: the problem - i just realized in being quite seriously worried for Dean-in-Hell thx to your fic (THANKS A LOT, FAHYE) - with the s2 finale is that it proved that even if you do go to hell, you can fight your way out of it and go to heaven liiiiiiek Daddy Winchester. Just cuz Dean made the deal doesn't mean that he's 100% marked. AND while that is comforting............IT'S COMFORTING. BAD MOVE, WRITERS. (yet, thnx for extra Dean angst and getting Daddy Winchester out of hell)
I HATE HOW SPN MAKES ME COMPROMISE MY ACADEMIC AND RATIONAL THOUGHT WITH well, they're pretty and i want them safe and possibly snuggling and who cares about all the other issues?
I HATE HOW SPN MAKES ME COMPROMISE MY ACADEMIC AND RATIONAL THOUGHT WITH well, they're pretty and i want them safe and possibly snuggling and who cares about all the other issues?
I KNOW, RIGHT?
And yeeeah, I didn't actually realise (having been spoiled for the finale pretty much forever) that John got out for good. Because surely even if Dean does go to Hell, Sam will just repair the railroad Devil's Trap and then let out a whole bunch more demons in order to give Dean a chance to climb out.
(Not that I think that's at all likely, because there's still a mortality hurdle, but it's made the Impending Doom less doom-like.)
I BET that Sam will set up a situation for SAVE-ATION and go to Hell HIMSELF to find Dean, pick him up, fight through hell and get out because of PREVIOUS PLAN OF AWESOME.
they will forever fuck up because they're trying so hard to give each other a leg up, and that just leaves neither of them with any solid ground to stand on.
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I did write this, though. It didn't fit with the rest of the ficlet, so I didn't post it, but...it could be part of a less-horrible sequel? I don't know.
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"Ooh," she breathes, and a smile breaks out on her face like she's just been handed an all-expenses-paid trip to go shoe shopping in Paris. Or whatever the fuck it is that makes demons smile. "Knock-knock."
"What?" you demand.
Her fingertips stroke down your cheek, and with the other hand she presses the piece of paper into your palm. "Raincheck, sweetheart," she says. "I've just got to take this call ( ... )
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SAM WILL SAVE DEAN. I'm just not sure how. Surely other people can write me out of this hole I have created.
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I HATE HOW SPN MAKES ME COMPROMISE MY ACADEMIC AND RATIONAL THOUGHT WITH well, they're pretty and i want them safe and possibly snuggling and who cares about all the other issues?
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I KNOW, RIGHT?
And yeeeah, I didn't actually realise (having been spoiled for the finale pretty much forever) that John got out for good. Because surely even if Dean does go to Hell, Sam will just repair the railroad Devil's Trap and then let out a whole bunch more demons in order to give Dean a chance to climb out.
(Not that I think that's at all likely, because there's still a mortality hurdle, but it's made the Impending Doom less doom-like.)
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OH WINCHESTERS.
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Dean: BITCH, WHAT WAS THE POINT OF THAT?
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