Endless, Ch. 4

[new_evolution]

Title: Endless
Rating: PG
Summary: "When a dream recurs like this, it is often because the dreamer is refusing to address a certain issue in his waking life."
Authors' Notes: Finally, the man himself shows up. I like this chapter a lot, but I feel like it echoes bits of the last one. Too repetitive? Contributes to the unity of the story? Pumpkin

Comments

[whatchamacall1t]

yayyyyyy!!!!

oh man. "He likes to think that, aside from spiders, he fears nothing, and he doesn't appreciate this unsolicited psychoanalysis.
and also: "Gerard's blazing enthusiasm, Mikey's buoyant good humor, Ray's quiet diligence, Bob's solid dependability."

just. god. in one sentece, you can capture things really well. i really liked this series!!! i'm really glad you posted it here.

[new_evolution]

'Tain't like I had anywhere else to put it. XD Glad you liked. And there's still one more chapter...jeez, I'm almost sad to be near the end. This has been a blast to write.

[normalhumanbein]

I love that Dream is pale by ordinary vampire standards, and your Frank! I think you really captured him.

[new_evolution]

Thank you. I've been putting a lot of effort into characterization in this story, trying to make everyone unique, since that's sort of the point of my giving everyone their own chapter...ohhh mannnnn, I can't wait to write the next one.