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luminous_vibe October 1 2009, 05:25:46 UTC
I wish you could have watched me read this. I think you would have found it funny so I'm going to tell you about it.

First, I saw that you had posted something so I skipped (yes, I skipped) out of my room to make a bag of popcorn specifically for the purpose of reading this (the bag was empty when I was done reading btw). When I read about the guy straightening everything I thought it had to be Ashton (a pairing I was kinda hoping for anyway) and when it was I squealed rather loudly. After that I was freaking out when Nao was getting nervous and saying stuff like 'If you hurt his feelings I'm gonna kick your butt Ash'. And Ash’s talking about love made me smile really big and giggle madly for a few minutes. That part was really well done. My favorite line was when he said "Love…it only sees other souls." I saw him saying it in my mind like a movie. And when he kissed Nao I kinda lost it and started dancing around and singing 'they're gonna be together' and stuff like that. And Nao's final line was just perfection. I melted in my chair.

Actually, I'm glad you couldn't see all this 'cause it was rather embarrassing now that I think about it. Do you see the insanity this kind of stuff incites in me? Anyway, enough of my spaz attack story.

This makes me happy because I really was hoping they'd be together eventually even a little bit. It seemed like something that had a good possibility of being very good for Nao (especially with being dragged to Hell and back) since Ash said he’d gone through the same thing so he’d be the perfect support for Nao but I didn’t know how you guys were with pairing characters with OCs so I didn’t want to think about it in case it didn’t happen but it did and now I really can’t wait to read the second part. (Wow that was a long sentence)

^.^

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maunetjeret October 1 2009, 14:34:50 UTC
Haha, dood, I love your comment.

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fae_dreamdance October 1 2009, 21:01:47 UTC
Me too. :D I love it too. :D You guys are all so awesome. Haha. :D

I do wish I could have watched you read this--I really do. :D Hell, I wish you could see us when we're in your seats. When Mandy has given me the chapter with her writing added in and I'm like "OoOoOoO!!" and I hunker in for a read. :D

So I get--and Mandy for that matter--what it means to look like an idiot while you read. :D We do it all the time--I laugh and I shout at them when they're being stupid and all that junk. :D

But! Yay! You saw it as a movie! We actually love it when we hear that. Because then something we did in describing it was right. :D We succeeded then. :D

We love Ash/Nao--that concept was something I adored since the very first instance of the two of them alone together. In the other story that is. :D It's been something we intended on doing since ahh...about a week and a half ago. :D So we've been freaking out for that long and we couldn't handle the wait any longer. We're like we must right this NAO! We don't have time to wait until it happens in our other story. :D So we cheated.

Thank you for reading!! And honestly...we're stoked about said insanity. :D Its a hell of a lot more entertaining. :D

-J

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