Mercy Me - Chapter Ten | You Kept It All Inside

Oct 19, 2009 19:22


(This is a sequel to the story God Bless Catastrophe - we recommend you read that first.)

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fae_dreamdance October 20 2009, 23:50:20 UTC
Mandy started this chapter and she wrote the initial Shou freak out--I think it can be considered that, by the way. A freak out to an extent. :D And I remember totally jumping around in my seat, arms pumped in the air over it. :D I was so in love with it myself, I praised Mandy for it, so I am ABSOLUTELY glad you liked it too. :D

He is too smiley, yes? :D I think we sufficiently destroyed that. At least for this chapter. :D

That's actually a conversation Mandy and I had when we were doing this--who did we side with? Did we agree with Shou or Hiroto? And really...we're both on the fence about it. Mandy...she had put it perfectly. She said that emotionally she agrees with Hiroto but logically she agrees with Shou. And thats really the idea here. :D Hiroto is all emotion really and Shou is much more logical than that--though certainly not the most logical of the bunch. :D

We're glad you see both sides of it and you understand it. :D Its exciting to hear. And yay!! Tora/Saga....aren't they cute? ^_^

Thanks for reading, as always!!!!!

-J

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