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Dead End

Mar 17, 2010 18:00

Title: Dead End
Fandom: Glee
Author: fading_lines
Pairing(s): Brittany/Santana, Brittany/Rachel
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None, really.
Prompt: "Santana/Brittany - Non-con. I don't care how you do it, it just needs to be rough and painful and preferably with tears."
Warning: This contains non-con (duh). So if you're not cool with that kind of stuff then click away from ( Read more... )

dead end, brittany/rachel, glee, brittany/santana, rating: nc-17, fic, femslash

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fading_lines March 18 2010, 09:23:24 UTC

Thanks! This is the first time I'm writing non-con and my first fic in like 2 years so I'm glad I didn't screw up too much. Lol, I'm sorry if I've scarred you or anything. I love your feedback and I definitely needed to hold someone after I wrote this :P

yankeefreak132 March 17 2010, 17:41:25 UTC

I agree, this was so emotional. I tend to read fics fast too and skip to dialogue but made sure I took it all in on this one. The hurt both physically and emotionally from both girls was heartbreaking. Wonderfully written, and I read this a while ago but had to withdraw a little before I could write a response.

fading_lines March 18 2010, 09:26:24 UTC

I'm sorry if I caused any physical or emotional pain but thanks for the feedback, it means a lot. =]

classical_wolf March 18 2010, 03:35:55 UTC

This was very very dark, but very very good. I'd be interested to keep reading this if you were to continue.

fading_lines March 18 2010, 09:25:29 UTC

Thank's for the feedback. I'm afraid someone will send me to a counsellor if I keep writing dark!fics like these, lol.

I will defintely write something down if a sequel pops into my head though.

faithlessfate March 18 2010, 09:46:58 UTC

wow. I love Dark, I love non-con... but this left me feeling... I need to be held. omg I want the comfort britberry that follows... :(

excellent work, though... as someone who writes dark? EXCELLENT.

gonna go comfort Brittany now.

fading_lines March 18 2010, 12:16:26 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm sorry if I have left any emotional scarring. To fix it up I can offer an e-hug from a stranger and - if I can pull it off - some comfort britberry.

Lol but to be honest,I've been thinking of a sequel where Rachel confronts Santana but I'm not sure how I'd go about writing it since I never thought about continuing it in the first place, but we'll see!

Thanks for the feedback! =]

motylik March 19 2010, 19:23:54 UTC

Wow. That was dark. But really well written. Would you be opposed to writing a sequel about how Rachel finds Brittany?

fading_lines March 20 2010, 04:17:32 UTC

It's in the works now, actually. =]

Thanks for the feedback!