Call Me Mom - Charmed

[fadewiththesong]

Title: Call Me Mom
Fandom: Charmed 
Characters: Chris, Wyatt, Piper
Rating: G
Summary: Takes place after The Courtship of Wyatt's Father. It's a Piper and Chris bonding fic. They've been avoiding each other since Piper found out. Not anymore. One Shot.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Call Me Mom

“Chris?” Piper called tentatively.

No answer, no orbs. Nothing.

Comments

[timmy64]

I like this, it bridges some gaps for me and provides a little humour. I particularly like Wyatt's lines, because you never really see him talk in the series.

Piper's lines are really realistic, you obviously have an intimate knowledge of the characters. Despite one niggling little spelling error, one that most people would laugh at you for, I really like this. I'll let you find the spelling mistake because i dont wanna come across as completely anal.

This is a really good piece.

[shaitanah]

I really loved that piece

[fadewiththesong]

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[shadowgardens]

I really like this. It's completely in character. Wyatt is a little kid, doing what little kids do, something a lot of authors don't quite hit. Poor awkward, unsure Chris.