fic for snow

[faded_lace]

Wow, I finished it! I'm so proud of myself. XD Writing porn is so hard |D;; No real comment, but please read the warnings and all that!

title: Worth It
rating: NC-17
pairing: Yaotome Hikaru/Inoo Kei
warnings: A somewhat roughly-described kink-driven sex scene. Everything is consensual, but read at your own risk!
word count: 3,325
beta: yomimashou
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Comments

[snow]

OH MY GOOOOOD ♡ ♡ ♡

I read this right before bed so I am incapable of coherent thought & will definitely return tomorrow to write a comment of actual substance, but--

OH MY GOD.

(tysm for writing this for me ;; ♡)

[faded_lace]

You're more than welcome ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[yomimashou]

This is so good *____* I've definitely reread my favorite parts multiple times already ahaha.

"Mmph," he responds, his mouth full of crepe, in a way that might be gross to anyone else, but that he knows Hikaru will appreciate I feel like this is such a perfect description of them XD

Hikaru really is this amazing at this sort of torture, Inoo thinks, and he loves every second of it. Yess. And I love doS Hikaru pretending to nonchalantly sort the mail... so perfect XD

And the porn is seriously amazing *__* How much they both are into the kink, and how much Inoo loves Hikaru's cock and enjoys the blowjob, and Hikaru purposefully making a mess on Inoo's face and just... yes. And I love the way you showed their feelings at the end, how dirty talk for them can mean "I love you" XD So adorable ♥

[faded_lace]

Ahahaha I'm glad ♥

|D;;;; They're so gross. Inoo is so gross. He's such an embarrassment XD;;

Ahahaha I'm glad that that seemed in character. I enjoyed the mental image.

Aw, yay. The way they just get each other is really cute, so i'm glad that came through here. And also the fact that they love one another a lot ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[britkit27]

This was really gooooooood *~* and so them, omg XD;; I loved their silent communication and doS/doM dynamic and how really clearly into it they both were. Also the fact that you made porn be not only really hot porn but also somehow show the depth of their relationship and feelings for each other and how well they fit, omg, it was beautiful.

The drive feels like approximately three thousand nine hundred and twenty seven years, but he supposes the few times Hikaru "misses" the stick shift and gropes Inoo instead help pass the time at least a little.

I love that line |D;;

[faded_lace]

Aww yay, I'm glad. I feel like they do really fit well, so I'm glad that came through here. |D Also I was proud of that line, so I'm happy you were amused. |D;;;

[faded_lace]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! That picture was so inspiring *__*

[singchronight0]

"Hikaruuu," he whines, tugging on Hikaru's sleeve, and finally, Hikaru turns to look at him, and just for the look in his eyes, dark and playful and incredibly hot, Inoo knows he's about to get what he wants

[faded_lace]

Wow, thanks for the long comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! #^_^#