fic!

[faded_lace]

Whew! This was a huge pain to write, but I'm actually really pleased with how it came out. It's my first fic as the leader of team two for shiritori, so I really wanted it to be special ahaha. Hopefully it's not too gimmicky and is still an interesting read

Comments

[yomimashou]

I really love this! Fuma's feelings and worries really came through in the whole fic and gave me all the feels ;~; And I love the chats and the emails and how they totally seem like them. And all the little bits from the song--I keep having moments where I realize more connections and it's awesome XD

And it was really cool to see this take on what I wrote~ I enjoyed reading it with the whole lead-up and from Fuma's perspective, and I love how well you made it fit the song. The whole thing was really sweet, and I'm so glad they got to enjoy their home date in the end ♥♥

[faded_lace]

Aww, thank you. ;___; Fuma has so many feelings, so I'm glad they came through here okay. And I'm glad you liked the formatting, too. Thanks for letting me base it on your fic!

[britkit27]

uuuuugh, this was so goooood ;~~~; I like that you can see how things have changed, how much the debut and the split have affected them, and they still love each other like crazy and some things haven't changed but there's other history now and they couldn't just flip the switch back to pre-Sexy Zone, they have to learn their way around the new relationship. Also scheduling hell and how much real life can make things awkward |D with all the tie ins to the song and stuff.

Poor Fuma came across really well here too ;; how he can't quite throw himself into it and just trust that everything will be fine and perfect because it wasn't once, and once burned twice shy all that, and poor socially awkward Hokuto who doesn't know how to make it easier because that was always what Fuma did ._____. But they're trying and learning and it is working out even if it's not as perfectly smooth as it was before, it'll get there eventually.

tl;dr, FEELS woman, this fic has so many T__T

[britkit27]

also omg I love your use of line the emails and everything and formatting all of that must've been hell |D so おつかれさま it was totally worth it.

[faded_lace]

Awww ;___; thank you on all fronts! I feel like these two have been through so much and have so much on their plates that things can't be as perfect as they used to be, but… they both love one another so much that somehow, it'll work out. And Fuma is really trying… XD;

Also, I'm happy you liked the tie-ins to the song and the formatting and all that! Thank you! XD

[9kinds]

Aw I really enjoyed this, I also listened to the song on repeat while reading haha. I liked how you incorporated all the messages and the emoticons like in the song lyrics.

Now, I really need to find the B.I.Shadow videos so we can watch them and I can fully appreciate pre-Sexy Zone era stuff.

[faded_lace]

Ahaha I'm glad that you listened to the song, that's definitely how it's intended to be read. And I'm happy you liked it! ♥

Yes definitely! We should do that soon ♥

[xanithofdragons]

That Fuma solo performance makes such good inspiration! I really like how you captured both the awkwardness and togetherness of a relationship in here. I also think it's really cool how you used a combination of messaging and narrative to tell the story.

[faded_lace]

It does, doesn't it! It was such a great performance. And thank you so much! That's really what I was going for, so I'm happy you read it that way and enjoyed it. Thank you for this comment! ♥