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[faded_lace]

Title: Numbers

Disclaimer: Saiyuki is not mine.

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Vague character death, one-sided 85, post trip.

Author’s note: I actually bothered to get out my history book, find Chang’an, and freehand the number of miles between there and India. xD

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[vink_sama]

Ooo~! I like this one. All the numbers you worked out are good, and reasonable, and stuff. It also seems very Hakkai-ish to think of things in numbers. :D

Two typos:

"8 scars still marred Gojyo’s form (6 of which Hakkai could not be hel accountable for.)" Need the "d" for held?

"15 times he had back out." Either "had to" or "had backed" right? For the tense?

Also, I had a little bit of trouble figuring out the last paragraph. It seems slightly awkward... I have no idea how to fix it, though... I mean I understood it, but yeah. Also, is that supposed to be "200 or so"?

[faded_lace]

Thank you~ I'm rather fond of it, myself. I'm glad the numbers worked out, and Hakkai is practical like that.

Okay, fixed. :D And the 2 is the time. 2:00 am. XD; I added in an "a.m." so it's clearer.