Jinguji-centric fic!

Jan 16, 2014 23:24

Embarrassingly, I started this like three months ago. XD; But... better late than never? Jinguji makes some interesting faces around Shori, and they are ~best friends who met ~through fate on their birthday, so... yes XD This happened. Enjoy?

title: no matter
pairing: Jinguji Yuta→Sato Shori; Jinguji Yuta/Nakamura Reia; Sato Shori→Nakajima ( Read more... )

one-shot, sexy boyz, sexy zone, bl

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mousapelli January 17 2014, 01:58:12 UTC
awwww, Jinguji. I really like how this is about how he's kind of a big mess, but he sort of knows that he is, not that it stops him from doing it. He likes all the attention and being loud and surrounded by lots of bustle because even in the midst of all that he's still kind of lonely. So this was a little bit sad but sort of sweet too, and anyway I really enjoyed it.

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faded_lace January 17 2014, 15:09:17 UTC
Yeah, basically, I pretty much see Jinguji as a big mess, so I'm glad you liked that aspect of it! I think he still has a lot of growing up to do and does get a little lonely due to not understanding himself all that well, so... yeah. XD;; Thanks for reading, I'm happy that you enjoyed it~

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yomimashou January 17 2014, 07:39:45 UTC
I really enjoyed this~ Baby Jinchan at the audition trying so hard to look cool would have been the cutest thing ever, omg. And I love your descriptions of the others at the audition and in the dressing room... poor Genki, and lol at Kishi's spinny chair XD And Amu |D;; Also, Shori's haiku is perfect XDD

And then, After all, Jinguji doesn't care, he doesn't care about anything, he's way too cool for that contrasted with It might not matter to Shori, but it matters to him, matters more than anything, and it makes his head spin, his heart squeeze tight in his chest, no matter how much he tries to deny it to himself gave me so many feels, omg. He doesn't want to care, but really, he cares so much, and he doesn't know what to do with himself ;~~~; (And Reia can see right through him...)

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faded_lace January 17 2014, 15:10:23 UTC
I know right XD; I just love picturing that. And haha I'm really glad you enjoyed all that, because I was hoping you would. XD;;

Aww, yay...? ;___; Poor Jinchan. And of course Reia can see right through him. XDD I'm glad you liked it!

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aibu_aika January 17 2014, 14:05:01 UTC
Ahhhhhh,,jinchan TwT you are so complicated (in This fiction)

I think when i was read the pair uit would-be more JinguReia but not too much €:

Nice fiction :))

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faded_lace January 17 2014, 15:07:04 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

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lady_aenea January 18 2014, 09:33:52 UTC
Your writing has a bittersweet quality that never ceases to amaze me and draw me in.
I love the care you take with the characters, your gentleness to write them. Especially because Jinguji is a mess here, and he doesn't understand his feelings and he doesn't want to... I kind of think he knows on some level what is going on but he is scared to hell of facing it, so he chooses to hide his feelings and use his vanity as shield... ok, stopping now XD

I feel a little sad for Reia, because I think that, in spite of knowing he is being used in some way, he really cares for Jinguji ;_;

I also loved your characterizations of everyone else!! Especially this:

Tears are streaming down his cheeks, but on his lips is the biggest, brightest, most beautiful smile Jinguji has ever seen, and in that moment, Jinguji suddenly feels steady again.
GENKI BABY *_*

I really thank you for this, poignant as it is... because its melancholic feel doesn’t but add to this beautiful atmosphere.

Thank you for sharing this!

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faded_lace January 19 2014, 23:38:14 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! I'm really flattered that you think so. And yeah, I really see Jinguji as a dumb teenager who doesn't really understand his own feelings or hurts or why he reacts strongly to some things the way he does, so I'm glad that came through here!

Me too. ;___; This is actually a constant thing that makes me sad. XD; I really feel like Reia cares about Jinguji a lot, and Jinguji is kind of an ass to him a lot of the time. XD; Even if it's because Jinguji just doesn't know how to handle his life.

I'm really glad that you liked it! Thanks for reading, and for this wonderful comment!

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