more Bakaleya fic!

Nov 12, 2012 14:23

I wrote more Bakaleya fic! Somehow, between the start of the movie's run and now, having seen it seven times, I think Maya has become my favourite character... despite the fact that he doesn't do much in the movie. XD; His backstory is painfully sparse (like everyone's in Bakaleya...) so I decided to build it up a little. This is my take on Maya ( Read more... )

one-shot, bl, shiritsu bakaleya koukou

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yomimashou November 13 2012, 01:35:00 UTC
Awww, this is so good~ I really love all the ways you fleshed out Maya's backstory, and how you showed the way he sees himself and the world changing over time. And the way his relationship with Satoshi develops is really adorable, too ♥ They're sort of perfect for each other despite Satoshi being an idiot? XD

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faded_lace November 13 2012, 11:56:52 UTC
I'm glad! I really enjoyed fleshing out Maya's backstory, since he's in a really interesting situation. And yeah, somehow... somehow, they work with one another XD;;;

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msoddish November 15 2012, 18:44:16 UTC
Oh my gosh!!! This is genius!
I LOVE it!
I don't even know what to say...
Um.... Let me hug you?

Thank you so much for writing this <3
(I think you should write a sequel to this because it's just amazing)

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faded_lace November 15 2012, 23:50:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it~

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chained_akame November 16 2012, 08:30:45 UTC
*______* That is so lovely <3 <3 For me, you described Maya really well, all his fears, the doubts and everything else that has been going on inside him all those years. I'm so glad to see a fic that has Maya as the center :D Your way of writing it and slowly moving on with the years and how he changed is adorable and really well-written. Not to mention how lovely his relationship with Satoshi is :D

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faded_lace November 17 2012, 03:08:05 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I really wanted to go deeper into Maya's backstory, since it's so painfully underdeveloped in the drama, and it obviously had a huge impact on how he is when we see him. Thanks for reading!

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ayang902 December 7 2012, 01:26:32 UTC
uwahh this is really amazing! i love the way you created the tension in maya'a backstory :3 i agree, i loved his character because he had a real story! his episode was my favorite out of the entire series because it dealt with such deep, real emotions x) I like how you were able to convey this all with minimal dialogue, and despite juri being so... juri-like xD they're so adorable together, and i can really see juri being (altho not the smartest child in the world) really caring and accepting of taiga and their friendship :) thank you for this!! bakaleya <3

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faded_lace December 9 2012, 04:08:47 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Maya was lucky to get as much development as he did, and I'm really glad that you liked my addition to his backstory. Bakaleya is ♥! Thanks so much for reading~

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racanai April 21 2013, 22:48:01 UTC
So, I have to say one thing first: this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I watched the drama only recently and although I like Maya, I haven't given a thought on how the change from being a girl to being a boy would've been for him, how his mind was set on "girl mode" thanks to his mother and what it entails. You show a great psychological inside in a boy who has been raised as a girl, and the judgment and bullying he has to endure. And this fic even has its moral message with Satoshi accepting Maya just like he is because gender doesn't define a person. Truly a great fic! =)
Secondly I have to admit I was disappointed it was already over when Satoshi found out. I would love to read more of Maya becoming more boy-ish and learning to accept himself the way he is, and how the others get to learn about the other side of him. There isn't by chance a possibility for a sequel? ^-^
Third point I feel the need to mention: Tatsuya having a crush on Tetsuya!!! ♥♥♥ XD

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faded_lace December 6 2013, 03:09:48 UTC
Wow, I'm so sorry, I never got a notification for this comment and I never saw it before, but thank you for taking the time to read my fic and leave such a long comment! I'm really glad that you liked it. Maya is my favourite character in Bakaleya, so I really wanted to show his feelings here. ^^

And... I can't promise anything about sequels, ever, because I write for fun and very rarely one request, but I do want to write more for him, so I'll do my best. ^^

Hahaha well, I mean, their love is adorable, so... XD

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