Recently, I've had a strange fixation with affairs XD;;; This is one product of said fixation... But actually, I think it came out quite well. Sho deserves more love... but perhaps this isn't the best way to go about it. XD
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gdi this got me all choked up ;____; You can really feel Sho's guilt, and his love, and at the end, Aiba's too. Poor them ;~;
I really like your Sho voice--you can really see all his motivations and struggles and why he loves Aiba so much, and I think it seems really true to how I imagine him~ Also, this sounds silly, but I really like how you did the sex scene XD You can really feel all the emotions involved, which I think is possibly the most important thing ♥
I'm really glad I got it across! Yeah, I felt like Sho felt really strong emotions about it, whether it was guilt or love, and I really wanted to write that.
Thanks so much! I really like writing Sho. And I'm glad the sex scene was good, too~ You know how I love the details.
my poor Sho-chan.. Or poor Jun? Honestly I don't know who to pity more (but I think I'll go with Sho because I can feel his guilt, love and jealousy and selfishness, if you may, more) I love Aiba dearly but he's really selfish here. I hope he'll find in himself the courage to at least let Sho go. For him to at least be completely happy and open.... Ah,this is quite a story. Thanks for sharing ^_^
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I really like your Sho voice--you can really see all his motivations and struggles and why he loves Aiba so much, and I think it seems really true to how I imagine him~ Also, this sounds silly, but I really like how you did the sex scene XD You can really feel all the emotions involved, which I think is possibly the most important thing ♥
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Thanks so much! I really like writing Sho. And I'm glad the sex scene was good, too~ You know how I love the details.
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why can't they be together?? why?? why??
this is too sad... T^T
thank you for sharing...
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thanks for sharing T_T
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Poor Sho...but he can't do this to Jun no matters if he's going crazy !!
thanks for sharing...really like it ^^
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