Sho fic!

Jun 06, 2011 23:02

Recently, I've had a strange fixation with affairs XD;;; This is one product of said fixation... But actually, I think it came out quite well. Sho deserves more love... but perhaps this isn't the best way to go about it. XD ( Read more... )

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yomimashou June 7 2011, 03:55:55 UTC
gdi this got me all choked up ;____; You can really feel Sho's guilt, and his love, and at the end, Aiba's too. Poor them ;~;

I really like your Sho voice--you can really see all his motivations and struggles and why he loves Aiba so much, and I think it seems really true to how I imagine him~ Also, this sounds silly, but I really like how you did the sex scene XD You can really feel all the emotions involved, which I think is possibly the most important thing ♥

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faded_lace June 7 2011, 05:10:47 UTC
I'm really glad I got it across! Yeah, I felt like Sho felt really strong emotions about it, whether it was guilt or love, and I really wanted to write that.

Thanks so much! I really like writing Sho. And I'm glad the sex scene was good, too~ You know how I love the details.

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masakichi June 7 2011, 04:19:40 UTC
*wipe tears*

why can't they be together?? why?? why??
this is too sad... T^T

thank you for sharing...

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faded_lace June 7 2011, 05:11:01 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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faradakiut June 7 2011, 06:10:41 UTC
as long as they're together, anything count right~
thanks for sharing T_T

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faded_lace June 7 2011, 06:58:40 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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mielove June 7 2011, 14:24:50 UTC
This was so sad T_T
Poor Sho...but he can't do this to Jun no matters if he's going crazy !!
thanks for sharing...really like it ^^

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faded_lace June 7 2011, 15:39:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. ^^

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so_gracefull June 7 2011, 15:18:10 UTC
my poor Sho-chan.. Or poor Jun? Honestly I don't know who to pity more (but I think I'll go with Sho because I can feel his guilt, love and jealousy and selfishness, if you may, more) I love Aiba dearly but he's really selfish here. I hope he'll find in himself the courage to at least let Sho go. For him to at least be completely happy and open.... Ah,this is quite a story. Thanks for sharing ^_^

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faded_lace June 7 2011, 15:39:56 UTC
I'm glad all those feelings came through! Thanks for reading. ^^

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