WOW. This was pretty incredible. I love this dark thread of Peter basically destroying the world for her. It's so awful and yet kind of beautiful? Is that wrong of my to think that? LOL! I also love how you connected each power with the emotion they represent in his mind. Great work all around!
Aww, thank you! I appreciate that. :D And just you saying it here is good enough for me. I like knowing that people are reading even if they don't leave feedback every, single time. :)
Very good. I love how you've portrayed Peter here. There's a great desperation to his motives, but in the end he does it for his love of Caitlin. Great job.
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