Comments | faceted_mind: Fic: Wicked Game

faceted_mind

Fic: Wicked Game

Apr 29, 2009 16:27

Fic: Wicked Game (courtesy of Chris Isaak)
Fandom: Supernatural
Spoilers: Seasons 1 and 2 Complete
Rating: Teen
Warning: I am no less bored than I was 2 hours ago

( A good laid plan was like chess. It was about following the pattern, the rules, about guidance and control and patience, it was about keeping the pieces in play long enough for them to be of use. Sometimes, it was about waiting ten years, and then twenty more for a plan to come into fruition. )

spn, fanfic, supernatural

Comments 3

yacoba April 29 2009, 17:04:00 UTC

brilliant idea, seeing those events through Azazel's eyes. And I just love this

Azazel was taken by his own pawn. The rules of the game broken.

The gun fired it's check-mate and the King fell.

awesome story!

faceted_mind April 29 2009, 18:01:13 UTC

*bows*

Ruby's version is on it's way. It's *much* longer :S

randomstasis May 25 2009, 10:24:43 UTC

IMO, this is a good little short on the YED's plan, nice use of the POV-but the whole thing is a little unfocused by the dragging out of minor lines- keep it tighter, turn adjective phrases into adjective nouns, rearrange the lines enough to focus on what's happening ( ... )