La Solea: Solitude

[facesandmasks]

Title: Solitude
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: G/PG
Warnings: What's there for me to say other than expressed in Jaejoong's POV?
Genre: Romance
Summary: Solitude is painful yet passion could be embraced, tightly.

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Credits goes to Maria Pagés YouTube page. The part I strongly suggest you guys listen to is from 1:07 onwards.

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[facesandmasks]

Spots for love_cassiopeia who is in China right now, haru_ran as a belated birthday gift (Happy 22nd to you!), krisooh, moon1084 and kami_no_kami as an early Christmas gift.

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[haru_ran]

Ui~ a gift for me. *.*
Thank you~ >//////< *cuddles you*

Woah~ I missed your writing, hun. So intense the dance. *.*
I loved it. :D&hearts

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[facesandmasks]

So many things had happened over the past few months. The lawsuit had sapped my enthusiasm to write actually.

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[haru_ran]

Aw~ poor you. Coming back after such a long time and then the first thing you notice is this. Anyway, I'm sure everything will go well. If not then we can't help it. I neither like thinking about nor ignoring it, but I just don't get too much into it. Drives me nuts to focus on that when I have other stuff to do so I just wait 'till everything is settled. ^^

Actually, it didn't do something to me at all, don't know why. o.o
I feel just as enthusiastic to write as before. Maybe I'm just strange. <.< >.>

Anyway, I'm glad to talk to you again. ^^

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[facesandmasks]

Maybe you're immune to it but since the case had killed the enthusiasm of many, I'm struggling to think coherently these days.

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[haru_ran]

Seems so but I don't even know why. o.o
Anyway, I hope you'll win the struggling with your thoughts, hun. ^^

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[love_cassiopeia]

Damn! Youtube apparently is blocked by the Chinese internet >_< Argh, forget about it, I'll check the song out on tudou.

Now, onto my thoughts on this shot:

I have mixed feelings towards this fic, one, because the lawsuit is annoying as hell and two, because YunJae's the best thing since sliced bread. It's frustrating because JaeChunSu are on one side and HoMin are on the other. Seeing YunJae separated mentally and physically does not necessarily give me any motivation to write, so I applaud you for bothering to go with my prompt. I was actually going to write a one-shot based on this, but because my muse had left for what seemed like months, I couldn't help but give up and hand this one to you.

I especially liked this line:

He, being the cloth and I, the thread to complete the clothes.Such nice imagery. I think I've always seen YunJae like this... totally inseparable. I enjoyed the first portion of the fic, but the second part was a bit rushed in my opinion. Perhaps a little more dialogue would make things better? I felt myself

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[facesandmasks]

I won't deny that there are elements in this fic that seemed rushed because I wrote it as and when I had the idea or time to write it.

The inspiration came to me as it is and I can't afford to let it go because most of the time, it never returns for a long time or even never.

What was written here was actually a scribble of my thoughts of separation and using Maria Pages' performance titled 'Sevilla' as the background music suited well. Lately, writing dialogues isn't my forte unlike writing long, winding essays.

Don't look for La Solea anywhere because you should look for the video titled "Sevilla de la Compania Maria Pages". Just type Maria Pages and you might find it.

What happened to the series? My partner called Ideas & Inspiration decided to take a break for now. Nothing goes through my mind right now on that series.