Beauty In You - A Poem

May 31, 2009 20:30

Title: Beauty In You - A Poem
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: G
Warnings: Instead of a fanfic, I wrote a poem.
Genre: Romance
Summary: Yunho's reply to Jaejoong's call for help. Expressed in Yunho's POV.

A/N: Surprise surprise, I crafted this in just 40 minutes.

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Jaejoong,
No words can describe my love for you.
You are the life I breathe,
You are the soul to my body.

Never doubt the faith I have in you
Because your doubt hurts me deeply.
You are the love of my life,
You are the fire I seek in times of coldness.

There’s so much I see in you.
I can find no words to express my love for you.
You are the beauty to my beast;
You are the steak to the red wine I drink.

You are my paper whose pen I write upon,
You are my face whose mask I’m wearing.
You are my euphoria whenever I’m happy,
You are my Boo Jae to your Yunnie Bear.

Be strong, my dear.
I want you to rely on me whenever needed.
I want you to tell me everything,
I want you to tell me what’s in your mind.
Never do I want you to hesitate.

“One day”, was what I promised,
And I wanted to fulfil that promise I made.
All I’m asking from you
Is to say ‘Yes’ to my question.

Will you marry me?

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A/N: Usually I would take weeks to write the next story since I always have writer's block and that ideas I have always remain inside my head, unexposed to the writing pad. But since I feel fired up to write a response, I might as well go ahead and write the response.

If any of you had noticed, 5 lines of the poem is based on

1) what we knew about Yunjae
2) references to a certain LJer's story
3) a fellow LJer who has been uploading pictures more than publishing her story due to her obsession with editing
4) another LJer whose blog means God of Paper in Japanese
5) a line in the poem is almost similar to the name of a certain LJ.

The first LJer who gets all correct will get a surprise from me. But I'm keeping it under wraps. ;)

pinksparkles14 had answered all questions correctly!

PS: Hints

1) Look for heavenswine LJ entry on 5th May 2008 at 5.05pm.
2) Look for love_cassiopeia LJ story that sounds almost the same.
3) It's krisooh's sister account.
4) It's pretty obvious to regular readers of this LJ
5) Do I have to say it?

I'm still thinking of writing the angsty letter I've been planning for weeks but work's consumed me. Especially for the next month or so. I don't know how soon will my next update be so do keep a look out for me. Of course, I'll still comment on your stories whenever I have the time.

Comments and opinions? Feel free to say them. Criticisms and suggestions for improvement are always welcome :)

beauty in you, poem, jaeho, yunjae

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