The Boy From Ipanema

[facesandmasks]

Title: The Boy From Ipanema
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: R
Warnings: Almost explicit smut towards the end of the story.
Genre: Romance
Summary: Who would expect that one would meet his love in Rio de Janeiro? Inspired by Ella Fitzegarld's "The Boy from Ipanema" song.



The Boy from Ipanema - Ella Fitzgerald

Tall and tan and young and handsome

Comments

[kyrgyzs_tan]

You watched porn to write this? xDD Yeah, the sex in the shower was reminiscent of the porn movies, somewhat.

This is great smut, especially since this is your first time too :D

I thought it would be more hardcore though, since you watched porn to do this xDD

[facesandmasks]

Because I had no idea how to poke unless I view it for myself.

Since it's the first time writing this, I had no idea how to make it hardcore. Maybe you have ideas and suggestions to speak of? I'll be more than happy to hear it.

[kyrgyzs_tan]

hmmm, have you read wedspawn's smut? I don't write smut myself, but I think her smut's pretty good and perhaps if you read them (if you haven't already) you will know which details to put in to make it smuttier.

Maybe you should delay the climax to make it more suspenseful, like they do in action films. xD

[facesandmasks]

I wouldn't want to because each time I read other people's smut, I feel demoralised because others can do better than me.

Deep inside, I still feel that there's something that's lacking in my stories. People say there's depth but I still feel something is missing.

[kyrgyzs_tan]

Well, depth is very subjective. It's hard to say whether something is deep or not, because it really depends on who's reading it.

Your stories have depth for oneshots/short stories. you could use more character development if you write longer fics and maybe that would make you feel that your fics are not lacking in something.

[facesandmasks]

I wish I could but I suspect I have ADHD syndrome. Or is it the case of writer's block?

Because even established and well known writers take years to finish a book but I'm not the kind of person who has the patience to keep readers waiting.

I have the desire to write chaptered stories and I'm still stuck at it. Or maybe I should write less-than-1000 words chaptered stories.

If you were wondering why am I so good at one shots? The truth is: when it comes to writing during Grade 7-10/11, we all have to write summaries of a given passage, down to 150 words or less. When it comes to writing a composition, we're encouraged to write between 350-500 words, due to the limited given time.

Even when it comes to writing theories for social studies and history, we're limited by time and the composition of marks in certain questions doesn't allow us the chance to be more elaborate.

Obviously such system has scrimped on my imagination and ability to write long-winded stories. I miss that ability to do so.