If I give you any more more more than you'll have read the entire chapter before I actually post it.
I can't say much about Evan, but you're right to pity Snape. He's in for it. And Lily's not going to let him off easily, either.
Don't be jealous...you write fine dialogue. I battle the characters in my heads all day, so when I write, it's...natural? They definitely have my sense of humor.
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Hm, I wonder if Evan still has feelings for Florence...
I feel bad for Snape. He's going to go through hell the next morning. Hm, how will Lily take the rumor?
I'm so jealous of the way you write your dialogue :S
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I can't say much about Evan, but you're right to pity Snape. He's in for it. And Lily's not going to let him off easily, either.
Don't be jealous...you write fine dialogue. I battle the characters in my heads all day, so when I write, it's...natural? They definitely have my sense of humor.
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