100quills ficlets.

Jan 06, 2007 18:24

Title: A Slap in the Face
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: 088 Stupidity
Word Count: 874
Summary: An encounter with James causes Lily to reflect on her decisions.
Warnings: This does have to do with Severus, though he is not a main character in this particular short.
Disclaimer: This is JK’s world, I merely play in it.

A Slap in the Face )

fic, 100quills, snape/lily

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matitablu January 8 2007, 14:39:13 UTC
Hey, that icon looks familiar! XD

Both of the fics are wonderful. I liked how you described Lily's slight change of mind about James - a tiny shift in her perceptions, but with huge consequences. On the other hand, as the rabid S/L shipper I am, I can't help but see a lot of melancholy in it - she is about to give up on Severus... the same Severus that can't sleep at night because he's thinking of her in the following fic ;-D And don't worry about the smut (ish) side of it - it's handled very tastefully and, what the heck, it's a teenage boy we are talking about... it's *implied* that a lot of wanking would be going on!

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fabricatedemons January 8 2007, 22:10:48 UTC
Yes, the icon is nice, isn't it? Someone very talented did it. ;)

Thanks for reading! You've hit the nail on the head with the James/Lily one. I was sad for Snape too; it's just one more thing he can be bitter at James about. It's an ever growing list, it seems.

And the second one wasn't that smutty, but the Severus in my head doesn't like his privacy invaded, and I could feel him peering down his nose at me as I wrote it. LOL He needs some action every once in awhile...even when it's with himself.

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randomneses January 9 2007, 01:49:37 UTC
I could feel him peering down his nose at me as I wrote it.

Ha! That would make a funny fan art!

He needs some action every once in awhile...even when it's with himself.

Sadly, I doubt he got much action besides with himself. Poor guy. Probably why he is so crabby XP

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fabricatedemons January 9 2007, 03:12:03 UTC
Yes, it would. But you inspired a doodle.


... )

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randomneses January 9 2007, 03:45:27 UTC
WINAR! XD

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