Title: Amusing Aftermath
Series Title: Wandering Home
Author: FabledFigment
Disclaimer: There is no original content, except for the original content. All Hail Joss.
Timeline: Post BDM with sufficient ‘growing-up’ time for River.
Rating: R
Series Rating: NC-17
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“Just some old current wine, I guess.” Is this some sort of wine they only have in galaxies far, far away?
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If you've read Anne of Green Gables, you might remember how Diana overindulged on currant wine instead of raspberry cordial...
I consider red currants a taste of home. We had bushes of them when I was little.
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hehe, glad to see you're back! love the teasing mal, and everyone trying to figure out where the fuck they are when they wake up.
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p.s. I just found out that I can order currant wine online! *fights temptation to order a bottle right now*
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One thing that really struck me, though, is your portrayal of River. I thought the beginning explanation was just wonderfully done, but then it felt like you made her too grown up. That's just my perception of her, though, and even though I don't see it the same way, I still loved what you did and really wanted to keep reading (and that doesn't always happen).
Great job; oh, and your Jayne is just magnificent. I love the way you write him! Looking very forward to more. :)
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Hmm, the portrayal of River... Yes. An interesting topic. I see a lot of people portray her as childlike, which I don't really like either. I tend to push towards the 'too grown up' side of her character. Plus, in this it has been years since Miranda. *shrug*
Glad you like my Jayne.
(and if this is the first of my stories you have read, I have more. Lots more.)
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