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1000 Themes - #223 - Hetalia - Germany, Italy & Japan

Jul 06, 2009 00:29

Title: Eating Pizza Without Shirts
Rating: G
Warnings: Making fun of Japan's conservatism, AU, written while tired, first actual Hetalia fic
Words: 464
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Pairings/Characters: Germany, Italy and Japan

( “At least I’m wearing pants.” )

*challenge: 1000 themes, c: italy (feliciano vargas), s: axis powers hetalia, w: 401-500, c: japan (kiku honda), rating: g, c: germany (ludwig)

Comments 1

abacusaddict20 July 11 2011, 00:32:38 UTC

Pff...okay so this is pretty hilarious. I don't think there's really anything particularly wrong with this fic, but I think that the characters could be better written. It's pretty easy to tell that you're getting better with writing here because the use of words is much better, just not my favorite because the characters are a little bit off.