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Gonna start here... abacusaddict20 July 10 2011, 06:44:08 UTC
Okay so I've been saving this idea for a rainy day, or some kind of holiday, and I know that we're done with the stupidness from earlier, but it keeps happening lately so I wanted to do something for you to remind you how much I love you. Like giving you an orange soda for no reason, I know that this is gonna probably make you pretty happy. So, here goes nothing!

Alright so I think the best thing about this fic is probably the fact that it pretty accurately displays their relationship. Also, looking back, these two are totally moirails. Just putting that out there. There are some word choices that you would do so much better now, and your skills at describing things in general, like "on the verge of flailing and becoming overall pathetic", have improved so much. The only reason I don't love this fic as much as I used to is because you are like ten times better now than you were then. On its own, not thinking about how talented you are now, this is still a really great fic and it's pretty freaking hilarious.

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