Interesting. When I was working on one of my other stories, I wrote it as an interlaced piece, jumping back from character to character in chunks to present an immediate view of two people at the same time. After II finished the first complete draft, I realized that I had written a visual presentation and ended up editing it back to a slightly less linear format because it would work better from the reader's perspective.
So I think it's cool that you went back to do a point by point comparison. While writing part three, I set up a detailed timeline, hour by hour, in order to get a sense of the space and time. House and Wilson will get back on the same time track, probably in part five or six, depending on a couple of details that I haven't worked out yet. I don't usually post works in progress because I like to be able to make wholesale structural changes as I get further into a piece, but then I never really intended this to be so long or involved.
Blah blah. There's almost nothing better than talking about your own work. Heh. Feedback always makes me think, so thank you for reading and responding.
So I think it's cool that you went back to do a point by point comparison. While writing part three, I set up a detailed timeline, hour by hour, in order to get a sense of the space and time. House and Wilson will get back on the same time track, probably in part five or six, depending on a couple of details that I haven't worked out yet. I don't usually post works in progress because I like to be able to make wholesale structural changes as I get further into a piece, but then I never really intended this to be so long or involved.
Blah blah. There's almost nothing better than talking about your own work. Heh. Feedback always makes me think, so thank you for reading and responding.
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