To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 6: Painful Reminders and Temptations

[exquisite_ugly]

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU, M for

Comments

[willow2883]

For those of us over 21 - way to go Bella! hehe JK, but not really. Now I especially can't wait for the next chapter Meggie! Possibly drunk Bella? Squee!
Nice that Bella & Charlie are getting closer and actually making conversation with each other. And the bakery job is very cute - Bella has a talent beyond cooking and whining! :P

[exquisite_ugly]

haha My reaction was the same. I was like, "Dammit, Bella needs to stop being such a goody-two-shoes!" ;) But damn wine hangovers = the worst. Did it once and NEVER AGAIN.

I love Bella/Charlie and they were sadly lacking in the books, so I'm making up for it. ;) Thanks for reviewing, hun!

[lsjcandy]

Ah, the showermoment isn't all that original anymore, still a hell lot of fun :')
I like the way they socialize a bit, not really hanging around with people, mind you, but still talking to them. I'm actually really curious about what would happen if Dana & co knew about the "ex-engagement", and then found out Bella and Jaxob were living together (and of course seeing that Bella is so into him, which everyone could know after three seconds - 'cept for Bella, for whom it took half a year to figure that out).

And the wine, people. Unless you're Bella "Fucking emo" Swan, don't touch. But it's an interesting take, given the fact that Jacob still has to come home..

Enjoyed the chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one :3

[exquisite_ugly]

Am I driving you crazy yet with the emo-ness? ;) And yeah, shower moment definitely isn't new.. but I like making Bella squirm a little. :)

As for Dana and co. All I'll say is there will definitely be a little more there further along, so it's not out of the realm of possibility! And lastly, I concur about the wine. Did it once; never again! Ever.

[lsjcandy]

Nope. I just like calling Bella "fucking emo" because she's drinking wine right now HAHA. I like the shower things, always, because that shows how she's obviously (and physically) SO into him.

YAY, I love it when they mingle with OC's :D

I never did it, not planning on doing so. Saw my mother do it way too many times.

[audreyii_fic]

Hee. I like most Drunk!Bellas. I look forward to seeing your take on her...

[exquisite_ugly]

Drunk!Bella is definitely entertaining. And I'm looking forward to working on it.. I'm debating ideas and stuff at work now, cause, well... I'm bored. haha. ;) Thanks for reading. :)

[ext_659205]

I know it's so f****n hilarious