To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 37: Epilogue

[exquisite_ugly]

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU

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[exquisite_ugly]

You know I can't resist J/B!babies. ;)

Twilight meets True Blood. I like it. SMeyer did have to screw things all up when she tried to create sparkly, venomy vampires. I miss fangs. :(

I never thought it was clever that she decided to make all these changes. Sparkling? Really? The touch of teeth and the venom is so freakin' annoying.. it makes it hard to write around that, so hence True Blood (who does vamps right!)

Very sweet ending. Jacob and Bella truly went through a lot together and the span here is what? 12 years? Wow.
Edward with Tanya. That's who he should have been with. My first thought was 'Yay! Edward's getting laid! It's about time!' I mean, really. Celibate for over 100 years. RME

Yeah, it was about 10 years later! And yes, I agree.. Edward not getting laid in all those years was pure ridiculousness. He's such a dippy vampire. Tanya the succubus will cure him of that. ;)

Looking forward to future stories, bb! I know the relief tinged with sadness that comes at the end of a long fic. 20 chapters wore me out! You're amazing!

Thanks hun! It's hard to write that length, hence why I am no longer writing more than 20.. if I make it to 20. LOL But yes, relief & sadness is exactly right.. it was fun, though! Do you have plans on starting another as well, or no?

[willow2883]

Do you have plans on starting another as well, or no?
I randomly opened Eclipse (my favorite of the books) a few weeks ago, and was re-reading the section of the book where Jacob jogs Bella 10 miles up the mountains to the campground (with the tent) and Eddie waiting. For some reason, I picked up in the middle of J/B's conversation and started writing, with just the intention of rerouting their conversation and playing with it. I started writing, and eventually ended up with them in the sleeping bag together, and Alice calling Edward, who is forced to leave. So I've got them alone, in the sleeping bag, and yet I don't want to do another wham-bam in the sleeping bag fic. So I left it hanging and not sure where I want to go with it. I was taking a walk 2 weeks ago, and an idea popped into my head and luckily I had my droid and jotted it down on my phone, because I have no recollection of what that idea was! LOL
So to answer your question in an extremely roundabout way - maybe! I have that started, and also started a Halloween fic for the JBNP Halloween thing.
Hope this all made sense, I just came back from an amazing vacation in Puerta Vallarta. And I wish I was still there. LOL