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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 34: The Aftermath

Sep 02, 2021 10:52

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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willow2883 September 5 2011, 03:12:45 UTC

First off, the Billy comment about Paul being a dick made me laugh!
Everyone got so hurt! They had the Volturi way out-numbered too! Poor Brady! (Who am I kidding - don't give two sticks about Brady! LOL). Glad Paul is feeling better, I would miss his snarkiness. Same for Leah.
That was brave, telling Charlie the whole truth and nothing but the truth. But I guess it was too late to hide anything from him at that point. I'm sure it was no consolation to him that it wasn't Bella's secret to tell. It would be a little disconcerting knowing your daughter was dating a dead guy! LOL And now he knows she wanted to become one of them. :(
How did SMeyer let that happen and think it was okay? It's never okay for someone to kill themselves, no matter how hot the dead dude is. RME
Great chapter and wrapping up of loose ends!

exquisite_ugly September 7 2011, 15:48:45 UTC

Thanks hun! I like a feisty Billy, by the way. ;)

And it is sad for Brady.. you don't want to know what I had planned before that last-minute decision. bahaha And yeah, it sucks that Charlie knows about Bella wanting to be a vamp previously.. that just hurts on top of all that weird shit. I wanted her to be honest (and I'm going with the angle that she would have changed her mind at the last minute anyway, Charlie being part of the reason).

And who knows what goes through meyer's head. She's a freak. lol Anyway, thanks for the review. :)

willow2883 September 7 2011, 17:44:11 UTC

And it is sad for Brady.. you don't want to know what I had planned before that last-minute decision.
Obviously you don't know me very well, cos, now I wanna know!

exquisite_ugly September 8 2011, 02:35:33 UTC

Oh, I knew you'd ask! ;) I just planned more carnage.. and for Jake to be more wounded than he was. I also tinkered about with destroying one of the Cullen's as well. The death was originally going to be Paul's.. he was going to be brave and reckless and get himself killed.

I wimped out.. I like Paul too much. :)

willow2883 September 8 2011, 02:56:25 UTC

It becomes very tempting to kill them off when the power is in your hands, doesn't it? LOL
I'm not one of those "must have my HEA" kinda gals. In fact, I like when an author isn't afraid to get in there and cause a little carnage and heart-break. I'd have gone along with whatever punches you wanted to pull.
This fandom is a bunch of wimps though, so I understand why you were hesitant to rough anyone up. LOL

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