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exp_loraline

✓ 5 sentences [Text/Video]

Mar 10, 2011 15:53

[Coraline is at work. She has decided work is boring. Work means being cooped up in a Pokemart all day long, where Pokemon battles are not allowed, and neither are Pokemon races or attempting to climb the shelves.

... What? She was trying to get a pair of Go-Goggles for a customer, obviously. Geez.

She only has one escape from boredom-- the Pokegear ( Read more... )

ic, capslock musings, this is totally productive you guys, hardly working, this counts as training, totally related to indiana jones, obvious canon reference is obvious

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[video] used_vinewhip March 11 2011, 03:22:27 UTC

You suck at writing stories. [have a tsuntsun.] It was reaaaaally boring. A snoozefest!

[video] 1/2 exp_loraline March 11 2011, 03:29:55 UTC

[EPIC FROWNY FACE.]
... Hmph. Well, thanks for the critique.

[video] 2/2 exp_loraline March 11 2011, 03:30:32 UTC

[After a small pause, she smirks.]
My next story's about a jerkwad that gets eaten by an Ursaring after she badmouths someone's storytelling. Does that sound less boring?

[video] used_vinewhip March 11 2011, 04:32:30 UTC

[YOU EXPECT HER TO GET THAT SUBTLY? pfft yeah.]

Oooh that one does sound better! Sounds like one of those... good lesson stories! Lemme read it, kay?

[video] exp_loraline March 11 2011, 05:03:26 UTC

[Oh man, swing and a miss! Coraline looks stunned for a moment, then a little frustrated... and then goes right back to smirking.]
Oh yeah, definitely! You'll be the first to read it.

... In fact, I might just write it up right now. [To gauge a reaction. If this girl gets the point, Coraline will be amused. If it goes over her head... Coraline will still be amused!]

[video] used_vinewhip March 11 2011, 10:22:55 UTC

Really? I feel so special! [Rydia smiles, then waits. and waits. and waits.]

Um, are you done yet?

[video] exp_loraline March 13 2011, 20:54:15 UTC

You can't rush genius!

[Or maybe you can; you get another CAPSLOCK text a minute later:]

CORALINE'S STORY

ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A SNOOTY PRINCESS.
SHE WASNT VERY NICE TO HER SUBJECKS. SHE CALLED THEM NAMES AND INSULTED THEYRE TALENTS. SHE THAWT SHE WAS BETTER THAN EVERYONE ELSE.
ONE DAY THE PRINCESS WAWKED INTO A DARK FOREST. IN THE FOREST SHE MET AN URSARING. SHE CALLED THE URSARING FAT SO THE URSARING ATE HER IN ONE BITE THE END.

[... Yup. Guess she made it more universal. ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED, RYDIA?]

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