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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 03:56:23 UTC
Lu Han is lying beside him when Minseok wakes up, curled into a ball with his knees pulled half to his chest and his arms wrapped around himself, his shirt tugged over his head. They are close, but there is a careful ocean of space between them, and in that moment, Lu Han has never felt further away. Minseok sits up and goes to where his clothes rests on the floor, but his fingers hesitate millimeters over them.

He sinks into a crouch, head against his knees. There is talking in the other room. Maybe they’re waiting for them to come out. They should have given them the medicine by now, right? Jongin and Kris…they should be okay for now, right?

Minseok laughs silently, bitterly. Okay for now. None of this was okay.

Lu Han stirs behind him, and Minseok dresses quickly, tucking his cock into his underwear without a second glance.

“Are you…okay?” Lu Han asks, and Minseok pastes a smile on his face before he turns around.

Lu Han is smiling as well, and Minseok blinks, as he lets the muscles in his face slide back into place. A moment later, Lu Han does the same.

“Honestly?” Minseok asks, but presses his lips together as soon as the words leave his mouth. He shakes his head, and hands Lu Han the rest of his clothes instead.

“I’m sorry,” Lu Han says. The shells of his eyes are moist, as if he’s going to cry. Minseok knows Lu Han better than that.

So, “I’m sorry too,” Minseok says.

He turns around, and opens the door.

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u_u

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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 04:40:09 UTC
wow, anon. this was really great ;~~; i liked how the plot and the porn complimented each other and, ugh, my heart?!

“What if you have what you want?”

“But that never really happens, does it?”

It’s happening right now, Minseok thinks

that entire part just slayed me u__u thank you for filling this, and wonderful job

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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 04:41:18 UTC
i really liked it, anon! i'm glad you wrote this :3 i was surprised that you went for xiumin's pov, but it was a nice surprise even though the subject matter is sad ;; i wish i could be more wordy or praising but all i can say is you did a really good job and i enjoyed this and thanks, even though i'm not the anon who requested lol

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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 05:14:58 UTC
not op but anon this is so so great. my poor heart tho ;________; this is everything i'd want from 72-hours verse, hot sex but with a focus on the implications of their situation. i love the implied backstory and unspoken words and all the spaces you create for us to fill in re: what their relationship was and what the fallout might be. thank you for posting ;;

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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 08:31:21 UTC
oh my god this is rly rly rly sad and sad in a different way than all the other installments so far and it hurts me

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Re: don't worry about it [5/5] anonymous March 19 2013, 12:54:09 UTC
omg anon there are legit tears in my eyes rn. the flashback scene i just-

you have broken me

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