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(DAY 3: #65) TO WHAT YOUR HEART ONCE WAS

Jul 28, 2015 10:31

Title: To What Your Heart Once Was
Pairing: Luhan/Xiumin
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7800w
Summary: Luhan is a kaleidoscope, reflecting different fragments of himself every day; Minseok will behold them all, and love them.

( Minseok switches the bags of takeout to one hand and fishes out his keys with the other. )

round: 1, rating: nc-17

Comments 3

bubblewoo July 28 2015, 15:51:56 UTC

This was beautiful. So, so beautiful. I love this so much, how they care for each other and love each other so much and won't leave the other despite whatever happens.

The last scene was the most beautiful one. It was so intense and I could feel the love they have, could feel how much Minseok loves Luhan and how much it hurts him to see Luhan like that. I felt my puny heart clench at the line "If you want the world covered with snow, I'd do it for you."The imagery is absolutely beautiful at the last scene as well. Two men who are in love with each other, surrounded with a blanket of snow, with flurries as well. *sighs* it seems so magical ( ... )

daylighreverie July 29 2015, 02:58:15 UTC

This is beautiful :< I can't even choose which one to quote because I have a lot favorite lines from this.

Thank you for writing this.

wonderstruckxxx July 29 2015, 08:41:36 UTC

I love how even though this fic is set in an alternate universe, it somehow felt real. The affection, the care, the love, they all came through. I mean I really felt everything, and it just really hit all the right places in my heart. Thank you for writing something so touching and beautiful! ♥