DAY ONE 💫 #148 You Are My Sunshine, My World

Sep 12, 2016 06:31

Prompt number: 148
Title : You Are My Sunshine, My World
Pairing : Kris/Lay
Rating : G
Side Pairings (if any) : -
Warnings : -
Word Count : 2720 words
Summary : Their fate intertwined when one was six and the other was five, brought together by a troublesome kitten and red claw marks.
Author's Note : I went through three other drafts before ( Read more... )

pairing: kris/lay, round 1: day 1

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littlestfrosty September 12 2016, 05:16:12 UTC
What makes you think that I was crying?
It's totally normal to cuddle in a blanket surrounded by crumpled tissues.
I don't know what you're implying.

But seriously tho. This was precious. I adore kittens. Like, so much. Like, I could cry (I didn't, but I could) thank you so much for writing this! I think you did a lovely job!

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olympianlove September 25 2016, 12:39:16 UTC
Your comment made me smile! THank you so much for commenting and i'm so glad you enjoyed this! It took me a really long time to get it right and I completely screwed up the tenses for this in the beginning lol. I love kittens too! Kittens and fanxing!

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rosevic87 September 19 2016, 23:55:20 UTC
I liked how you added yixings healing powers. But oh goodness, Kris is so accident prone XD

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olympianlove September 25 2016, 12:40:22 UTC
Yes, Yifan is a big clumsy idiot! But he's Yixing's big clumsy idiot XD THank you for commenting! It means a lot to me!

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cwtchbuddy September 25 2016, 11:43:41 UTC
This was super cute~ All the kitties;-; I like how you wove the story to show their powers naturally, small snippets from before that reflected how they are still the same even after years and many cats later*^^*

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olympianlove September 28 2016, 01:49:50 UTC
Yes they're still massive saps! And the kittens! I love writing about the kittens! Thank you so much for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)

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