Jul 18, 2010 16:36
Anyone available for a beta?
~500 words
Kirk/McCoy
A hint of h/c and a good deal of schmoop
NC-17
I'm looking for a general beta with an eye for tense-switching, who is willing to give me the hard truth about whether I'm a) over the top with the cliched schmoop and b) if my attempt at pseudo-porn sucks horribly.
Thank you!