336: A Love Poem

[exceptindreams]

"A Love Poem"
Sivakami Velliangiri

Y  o  U
f
 a
  l
   l
into  my  eyes
  like  red
    chilli
d  u  s  t.

Comments

[orangepeel]

I have a soft spot for visual poetry. It's like a pun, it's always so clever.

[etherealizabeth]

That? Sounds painful. I don't cherish the thought of red chili dust in my eyes.

[patheticliform]

I agree. Is it because, maybe, they both make her cry?

[plaidseven]

This reminds me of the poem by Margaret Atwood, "you fit into me"

you fit into me
like a hook into an eye

a fish hook
an open eye

[angelvivian]

I love the above poem, and this Margaret Atwood one too!

[fridge]

imagery = brilliant.

much love. ♥

[icemint]

I say....Ouch.

[tala_emerging]

Me too.