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209: A Special Theory of Relativity

May 23, 2008 20:35

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alan bold

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sectionchild May 24 2008, 02:06:35 UTC

wow.

I'm going to remember that one. I may have to copy it down somewhere.

coughtupbydeath May 24 2008, 02:57:48 UTC

Brilliant.

apsullivan1 May 24 2008, 03:49:57 UTC

I'm convinced this is the best community on livejournal.

tulips_and_lace May 24 2008, 17:31:13 UTC

It is.

exceptindreams May 25 2008, 17:05:22 UTC

Thank you.

crazedazed13 May 29 2008, 04:57:51 UTC

It certainly disappoints me the least.

katoki May 24 2008, 04:20:59 UTC

While reading this I got the image of Einstein sticking his tongue out in my head.

I guess that's not really an observation on the poem, just a random thought I felt like sharing.

c22_paradox May 24 2008, 04:40:16 UTC

Okay, so generally, I adore such references, really. And granted, this does have a certain charm. But as a piece of poetry? It's rather sub-par; I mean, it's really just catalogue and expansion, catalogue and expansion, without any deliberate syntactic implication. Gah.

Enough whining; every single other poem I've seen posted thus far though, two thumbs up. Lovelovelove : )

villanelle May 24 2008, 11:19:23 UTC

I agree. :/ The mass of a moving body/Exceeds its mass/When standing still. is witty and may delight the brain at first glance but it's hardly musical, it's not even a strong image, it's hardly poetry. Not too much of a fan of this one although I guess it's original. I have to agree that all the poems I've read here are gorgeous.