When Wise Mechs are Banished -- Jazz

[exactly_what]

Title: When Wise Mechs are Banished -- Jazz
Word Count: 1416
Summary: Prequel to Where Wise Mechs Fear to Tread. How and why Jazz was sentenced to base 84G1-07MVE-VR5E.
Rating: T

Comments

[pjlover666]

Welcome, and wow, what an amazing start ^^

I really, really liked it. The technique and style you chose to use here was interesting and I loved the simplicity of the sentences. A nice look inside Jazz's head - awesome!

[exactly_what]

I'm glad you liked it! I was a little hesitant to post it, just because it's so much different from how I usually write and I wasn't sure if it would... well, be fun or easy to read. I'm glad you like it, and thank you for reading and commenting!

[silberstreif]

Welcome and I fully agree, this is an amazing start. :) I actually read the first chapters of your two fics in this verse on fanfiction.net yesterday. I enjoyed them very much, so when I saw this here I had to read and comment. ^^ I couldn't get you fic out of my head the whole evening.

Poor Jazz, he really is completely broken, what? I wonder if someone thought and sent Jazz to Prowl's "Pit" deliberately, or if it was by chance... who ever it was he obiviously saved Jazz. :D I find it kind of ironic that they broke up and then bonded later when they were both banished.
"a bit glitched" - indeed, Prowl, master of understatement. But then, if he leads a base like that... maybe it really was just a bit. ;)

This is a beautiful look inside Jazz's head, how he thought, how he needs anchors and friends... Thanks for sharing!

[exactly_what]

You couldn't stop thinking about it? Well. That's... flattering. o.O Thanks for commenting.

And yes, very broken. :( And sending him to Prowl was a complete, though fortunate, accident.

And I do think that Jazz was a little more than "a bit glitched," but yes, Prowl understates things a lot. *shrugs* That's just how my Prowl is. It's no longer important, so it no longer matters just exactly how much he downplays things...

Heh. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[silberstreif]

Yeah, my mind liked your story so much it turned it into a (pretty much different) bunny.

I like this character trait for your Prowl. ^^

[exactly_what]

My bunny spawned a new bunny? Huh. Well, if you do end up writing something for said spawned bunny, let me know. I like your stories, and I'd like to see a story that was inspired (?) by this story. ^.^

(By the way, I love your icon... Might just steal it from you. ^.^ )

[wicked3659]

Welcome! :3

Great start really well done fic a very nice look from jazz's perspective. Really enjoyed it, I hope there's more at some point.

[exactly_what]

Glad you liked it! There will be more, eventually. Wheeljack is coming next, but I'm thinking that writing an interlude or something that shows what's going on at the base between new arrivals.

[kkcliffy]

I've been reading both fics from this verse on ffnet as well and was so happy to see exactly what happened with Jazz. I love the style you used for this one. It was the perfect choice to show what Jazz was going through.

Also, this verse is one of my favorites! I'm thoroughly enjoying both fics.

[exactly_what]

Glad you liked it! Honestly, I was a little iffy about posting it as I wrote it. The style was/is completely different from what I normally do. I liked how it turned out, but I wasn't sure if anyone else would. But I'm glad it worked.

And one of your favorites? Wow... I'm flattered. ^.^ This 'verse honestly started as kind of a joke to me... Just a game to play. I'm surprised and happy it's gotten so popular.

[ledishae]

Cool, Jazz is a fascinating character. I love how he become so simplistic whenhe's still.