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rose0mary March 21 2013, 23:43:05 UTC
*snickers*
If Blue, Smokes, and the twins had been allowed to deal with this on their own, they'd never talk to each other again.
Not that I'm advocating what Prowl and Jazz did, but the four did need a push.

Sounds like the bunny is winding down. Ah man. I am really enjoying the quick updates and love this story!
Does this mean we get to see more from your other series? (Like, 'where wise mechs fear to tread' - I kind of want to see reactions of bots when they find the Quintesson in Percy's lab. Or more explosions. Those are always pretty - especially when no one is deactivated).

*laughs*
Well, the warning that Jazz and Prowl are watching, might have put a damper on some activities, but it doesn't mean everything is going to stop.
I think that was a friendly warning 'DO NOT KILL EACH OTHER! or Ratchet will have our hides.'

Using the brig instead of a closet? Priceless! I love every mech's reactions when they are escorted.

Didn't Sideswipe and Sunstreaker get the memo? Jazz and Prowl donated Spark energy for Bluestreaks anticipated arrival, so he is technically their youngling - abit with five other parents, but those two .... yeah, no one wants to get on their bad side.

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exactly_what March 22 2013, 00:21:52 UTC
Oh, of course. :)

Yeah, story's winding down now. Don't know exactly, but there're just a few more chapters for this one.

And yeah! Of course there'll be more WWMaB. :D It's just that this bunny's sorta been overriding the other ones. -_-

I do belive so... Heh. They're basically telling the Twins and Blue to work out their differences peacefully, or Bad Things will happen. ^.~

Heh. Yeah, that was sorta a last minute thing the bunny pulled out of the hat. It suddenly said that hey, closet's overused, and... well, there's always the brig, right? :D

Hahahahah... yeah, Prowl and Jazz, ultimate overprotective creators, even if they were only two of seven/eight, if you count Smokey.

Thanks for commenting! And such a nice, long one too! ^.^

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rose0mary March 22 2013, 15:45:16 UTC
*sigh* every good thing must come to an end. Eventually.

Oh, Where Wise Mech are Banished! I'm sorry, I got the two confused.
(And I may not know as much as you about bunnies overriding others, but even I know sometimes a break is all that is needed to get creative juices flowing again).

*Nods*
Bad things WILL HAPPEN if Sides and Sunshine can't trust Blue to have their backs. Kind of surprised Prowl & Jazz were the ones to do something about it before anyone else did.
Unless Prime and Ratchet and everyone else knows that the 2IC and his bonded have everything under control - and them intervening would mean 'this is a formal problem going on records', which is what everyone is trying to avoid, cause of reactions when various mechs learn BARRICADE IS ALIVE - BUT HE'S AN AUTOBOT! NOOOO HE KILLED SO MANY OF US!

Closet is overused - and that is not really where talks go. The Bring was a MUCH better choice IMHO.

*eight?* Recounts. Right, I had forgotten about Smokey and he was the one donating memories and everything.

Long review?
I guess
When I get started, its hard to stop.
(Unless I'm told people want one word, one sentence, one line reply, then I try to comply.)

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exactly_what March 22 2013, 20:14:22 UTC
Sadly, it is true. :(

Haha... they're close enough. ^.^ (and that is also very true.)

Well... I just really like plotting Prowl and Jazz, so I had them do it. I didn't really think about that, but it does fit very nicely.

Haha... I love long reviews. Never worry about babbling with me! :D I babble just as much.

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