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evolutionsgirl

Pam's October fanfic challenge

Oct 15, 2007 22:03

Title: Haunted
Author: Carm
Rating: PG-13 for gore
Summary: The death of the season brings Alex back to the death of a man.
Notes: This was the October fic challenge put out by Pam. My words that I had to use were dried leaves, blood, flashlight, ghostThe dried leaves crunched underfoot as Alex Mahone walked across the backyard. It was a warm ( Read more... )

Comments 6

calm_breeze October 16 2007, 11:18:54 UTC

Very nice! I really enjoyed reading this. It was scary and creepy and had a wonderful pace to it.

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evolutionsgirl October 16 2007, 13:37:27 UTC

Thanks! =)

pamalax October 16 2007, 13:59:27 UTC

Lovely work dear lady :o)

For all he's tried to fight it I think its painfully clear the ghosts of his past are eating our poor Alex alive slowly but surely.

Poor, poor Alex :o(

evolutionsgirl October 16 2007, 22:28:18 UTC

Thanks :)

There are many things in our dear Alex's past that he regrets, and those ghosts of things done wrong are driving the poor thing insane. *sigh* I'm gonna feel horrible when we finally lose him.

niektete October 21 2007, 12:25:04 UTC

Very good character study of Alex! I especially love the end line; "Thank God for that little white pill." Also, this would have been perfect for a horror movie - the voices, the ghost of your past etc. You're great with the detail, by the way.

evolutionsgirl October 21 2007, 20:53:32 UTC

Thanks. There's just something about Alex that makes me want to get into him, ya know? He's a good person, but he's messed up so bad and it's destroying him piece by piece.