Story: Unnecessary Comments by evilynmetal [dabble # 86]
I got some good reviews from the first one on dokuga_contest. Here is the continuation of it with the next word perfection challenge for this week. Lick, 300 words.
Title: Unnecessary Comments [dabble # 86]
Author: evilynmetal
Theme: Lick
Genre: Humor
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Word Count: 300
Summary: Words to be infuriated by can be rather silly. Continuation of my 'flat' dabble from “Uttered Words”
Note: Second time posting anything. :D Thank you for all the comments from the first one. :) Don't worry I will get to what he really said and what happened.
Unnecessary Comments
Kagome viciously scrubbed away as she fumed in the midst of her anger. The hot spring should have been one to invoke relaxation, but even such in a serene place, she refused to compose herself.
I will kill him, I will destroy him, I will obliterate him. The mantra looped within her consciousness as various scenes for ways to annihilated the dog demon flowed freely.
Slender fingers wrapped around her dainty wrist and gently pried the loofah out of her hands.
“You are going to rub through a layer of skin if you don't stop,” Sango said, sternly. The raven-haired girl plopped unceremoniously into the heated water, which resulted in the water to raise and splash the young demon hunter.
“I know, sister. I can't help it. That good-for-nothing dog had to open his mouth where it had no business, speaking unnecessary comments.” Kagome knocked the surface of the water as it rippled away her reflection. Her frown still marred her face. She didn't want it there to remind her of how much of a reaction he had elicited from her. She knew she was being a child about it. All her actions accomplished nothing other than to let her lick her wounded pride.
One would have thought that being raised in a noble house of royalty, a lord would have been properly educated on manners. He was being no better than her by being rude to her. Then a thought occurred to her that made her expression split into a smile. Sango gave her an inquired look.
“Does this mean that great 'Lord' Sesshoumaru is no better than InuYasha in acting like a spoiled brat?” Kagome giggled at the thought of being overheard by the great dog demon.
Sango laughed outright at her sister inquisitive accusation.
Title: Unnecessary Comments [dabble # 86]
Author: evilynmetal
Theme: Lick
Genre: Humor
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Word Count: 300
Summary: Words to be infuriated by can be rather silly. Continuation of my 'flat' dabble from “Uttered Words”
Note: Second time posting anything. :D Thank you for all the comments from the first one. :) Don't worry I will get to what he really said and what happened.
Unnecessary Comments
Kagome viciously scrubbed away as she fumed in the midst of her anger. The hot spring should have been one to invoke relaxation, but even such in a serene place, she refused to compose herself.
I will kill him, I will destroy him, I will obliterate him. The mantra looped within her consciousness as various scenes for ways to annihilated the dog demon flowed freely.
Slender fingers wrapped around her dainty wrist and gently pried the loofah out of her hands.
“You are going to rub through a layer of skin if you don't stop,” Sango said, sternly. The raven-haired girl plopped unceremoniously into the heated water, which resulted in the water to raise and splash the young demon hunter.
“I know, sister. I can't help it. That good-for-nothing dog had to open his mouth where it had no business, speaking unnecessary comments.” Kagome knocked the surface of the water as it rippled away her reflection. Her frown still marred her face. She didn't want it there to remind her of how much of a reaction he had elicited from her. She knew she was being a child about it. All her actions accomplished nothing other than to let her lick her wounded pride.
One would have thought that being raised in a noble house of royalty, a lord would have been properly educated on manners. He was being no better than her by being rude to her. Then a thought occurred to her that made her expression split into a smile. Sango gave her an inquired look.
“Does this mean that great 'Lord' Sesshoumaru is no better than InuYasha in acting like a spoiled brat?” Kagome giggled at the thought of being overheard by the great dog demon.
Sango laughed outright at her sister inquisitive accusation.