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evila_ann

Three Stories 17.06

Dec 21, 2007 23:23

Title: Three Stories
Fandom: RPS
Story: Highway: Roadside Attraction 17.6
Characters: Alan Davies and Robert Sean Leonard
Authors: michelleann68 + evila_elf = evila_ann
Prompt: 10_per_genre 09 Traitor (Drama)
Word Count: 3099
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Thanksgiving is a time of family. And the stress that goes with them. Alan finally gets to meet Robert’s family.
Authors’ Notes: Feel free ( Read more... )

09 traitor, roadside attraction

Comments 4

moozer72 December 22 2007, 17:42:40 UTC

Oh way to go! That was so dead-on!! Totally loved it! : )

(Alan) I take a deep breath, hearing the bell buzz faintly on the other side of the door. I feel as though I am in my teens, meeting the parents of the person I fancy for the first time. Well, technically, I am. Minus the teens part. I want to squeeze Robert's hand, but I can't because my hands are clammy and we agreed to keep the touching to a minimum and the door is opening... (Hee Hee. Just met a guy so I kinda know the feeling! : ) )

(Mom) I hear footsteps behind me and wonder if the calvary has arrived to save me. WITCH!!!

(Alan) I am rescued from a very awkward staring contest by who could only be Robert's dad. (Liked Robert's dad. Thank god for him. What a sweety. How'd he ever put up with his wife?! )

moozer72 December 22 2007, 17:44:54 UTC

(Alan) I turn to look at his brother and he winks at me. It is all I can manage to not bust a gut laughing: Simple gesture, but I could see so much of Robert in it. (Aww, that was cute! Very nice touch ( ... )

moozer72 December 22 2007, 17:45:11 UTC

Dinner looks lovely as Mom and Dad start to bring it out. I get up to help, but Dad pushes me back to my seat before I can fully stand. Alan finds that amusing, earning him a gentle kick under the table. (Hee hee. Domestic bliss much? Ok, maybe not bliss, but still made me go awwww ( ... )

evila_elf December 23 2007, 01:47:16 UTC

Sorry, LJ made me split the post up.
But thanks to LJ, we got three lovely posts :D

Thanks bunches! It is great to know the bits that seemed to work well.
And I actually tried real hard not to make Joy the bad person, but I wasn't all that successful, hehe. At least she attempted to hold her tongue ;)

Very happy you enjoyed. We had fun with this :D