FMA Fic: "Fragments Born of Pain" 1/?

[evil_little_dog]

Title: Fragments Born of Pain
Author: evil_little_dog
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Rating: R
Word Count: Appx 19,600 (at present, as story is incomplete).
Characters/Pairings: Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric, Winry Rockbell, Paninya, Dr. Marcoh, Original Characters. Edward/Winry
Warnings: Post 108 fic.
Summary: The discovery of a transmutation circle in an

Comments

[seta_suzume]

Ooh, this is interesting right off the bat!

I liked the picture this gave me of Ed and Winry's life at this point in Rush Valley (Ed reading all over town, the annoying neighbor cat...).

[evil_little_dog]

Aww, thank you!

I really wanted to show that Ed's learning to fit into Rush Valley, despite how much he doesn't like it there.

The annoying neighbor's cat might be inspired by a few running around the neighborhood here. >.>;

[seta_suzume]

You're welcome! I've been looking forward to the big bang fics in general and I really liked yours last year.

I think you hit the mark.

Ha ha, ooh, I can imagine. We don't seem to have any troublesome ones near us these days (not more troublesome than our cats in our own house, anyway ^^;).

[evil_little_dog]

Thank you; that one was hard, because I was sure that no one would read it, 'cause it was so focused on Ed and Winry and a bunch of original characters.

Rush Valley has to be an interesting place. I kind of picture it in my head as a giant market, going all day and all night. I don't see it being particularly...high tone?...but relatively friendly, at least.

I bought Mom a sonar animal chaser to put in the plot where the cats are relieving themselves...we'll see if it works.

[elasg]

Yay! Posted! I am so pleased with this story, you have no idea. I think it's my favorite of all the pieces of yours I've read. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.

I was also wondering if you would like me to do another piece for the story? I am not fast, as you know, but is there a scene in particular you'd really want me to illustrate? I've got some ideas, but since you're the author, I thought I'd see what scenes you wanted to see.

[evil_little_dog]

Posted most of what's done so far. I think you've seen how far I've actually gotten; I'm hoping to do some more work on that soon. Hope you'll take a look at the other story, too; even though it's 2003 anime.

I do have plans for what I hope to have happen. We'll see as to what the characters insist I get done.

I would love another piece for this story. Let me think about the offer.

[kyofujimiya]

This is awesome so far! I love how you write Ed and Winry together. And I'm intrigued to read the next part!

[evil_little_dog]

Thank you! I hope the story lives up to your expectations. I've been working hard on it.

[cornerofmadness]

I do really like this story

[evil_little_dog]

Thank you! And thanks again for all your help.

[cornerofmadness]

no problem

Somehow...

[ookamikagakusha]

I imagined the damn cat matching Edward's glare...you know yellow eyes and all. I do enjoy hearing about Winry and Edward's life "after"...I am one of the ones that say that they have a lot of sex to make up for, so naturally I think Winry could be a tease, but Edward too. Loved it good as always!

Re: Somehow...

[evil_little_dog]

Cats...why did it have to be cats...

They both can be teases.

Hope you enjoy reading the rest of it posted!