FMA Fic: "Lost and Found" 1/1

Jun 19, 2012 06:53

Title: Lost and Found
Author/Artist: evil_little_dog
Rating: NC-17ish?
Warnings: Bluebird’s Illusion, Pride!Ed ending.
springkink Prompt: Fullmetal Alchemist, Winry/Pride!Ed, Lust, “Let’s be sinful.”
Word count: 3,300
Summary: If Edward Elric is dead, who is the person Winry keeps seeing?
Disclaimer: Arakawa owns Fullmetal Alchemist, and the group that designed ( Read more... )

fma fic, fan fic

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vince_moon June 19 2012, 19:45:59 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this. I like the twist it has.

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evil_little_dog June 19 2012, 21:13:37 UTC
Thank you!

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evil_little_dog June 20 2012, 00:52:57 UTC
I first heard about BBI shortly after I got involved in FMA fandom, but didn't realize it wasn't an officially sanctioned offshoot until I started reading more on it. It's still a very hot item (someone just sold a copy of the game for a lot of money). It also has more of a slash slant to it, or at least, that's the impression I've always gotten from the game, though nothing out-and-out happens, it's just implied.

cornerofmadness said she wants more of this story, too, so you're not the only one.

I'm really glad you took a chance on this. Thank you for your kind words!

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ishte June 23 2012, 06:40:35 UTC
This was awesome. I'm aware of a Pride!Ed universe storyline. I've seen quite a bit of really nice artwork, but I have never actually had an opportunity(? ...erm the time) to go looking for it to read. This was a nice little glimpse into it... with some fun hotness thrown in. I did find some wordos that your beta may have missed.

This time, he shivered, fitting himself on top of her, staring into face.

I think you mean:

This time, he shivered, fitting himself on top of her, staring into her face.

Winry helped him with her brassiere and her panties, tossing both of them aside, then laying back down.

I think you'll want:

Winry helped him with her brassiere and her panties, tossing both of them aside, then lying back down.

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