FMA Fic: "I Love the Night Life" 1/1

[evil_little_dog]

Title: I Love the Night Life
Author: evil_little_dog
Characters/Pairings: Ed/Winry, Garfiel, Al, Paninya
Rating: Teen
Summary: The night life in Rush Valley is a little…underwhelming…for Ed.
Disclaimer: Arakawa and I are just like sisters! Uh. Not.
Word Count: Appx. 3,800.
Written for the help_japan auction, for bob_fish and the prompt of: Rush Valley nightlife,

Comments

[vince_moon]

Ed can be really slow sometimes. :) Great story.

[evil_little_dog]

He can be dense, indeed.

Thank you!

[sonjajade]

poor Ed. If it wasn't written down in a book he doesn't know anything about it XD

[evil_little_dog]

He's just...dense. Poor thing.

[sonjajade]

I also wanted to compliment your artist! Holy cow!!

[evil_little_dog]

I <3 gorowek. :D

[dreamer1789]

XD I laughed so hard, this is priceless.
Very nice of Al, to spell it out - though, for him it's better in the long run as well.

[evil_little_dog]

I'm glad I made you laugh. :D

Sometimes, Ed needs help. Fortunately, Al was there to offer assistance!

[bob_fish]

Back to finally give a proper comment and thank you for this! ♥

First of all, this was hilarious from start to finish, and well worth the wait. Ed's denial is hilarious, as is the thought of him being forced to watch cabaret while dressed up. I love that Winry won the tickets in a poker game, and I love that Al is suave enough to point out the best use of the theatre box. XD And that Ed doesn't understand why Al would smile at everyone when he could just glare.

The illustrations by Gorowek are just amazing, too - so hot and funny and fluidly drawn. I must go leave her some love now!

THANK YOU ♥ AGAIN (and so sorry it took me so long to leave this the review it deserved)

[evil_little_dog]

You're very welcome! I'm glad it was worth the wait.

Ed's such a bundle of stress in this story. Stupid dressing up for theatre. Stupid girls with fluffy panties. Okay, not so stupid girls with fluffy panties.

:D :D :D

[theothardus]

"Al grinned at girls a lot. And at guys. Actually, he grinned at everyone. Weird. Scowls worked better."

"...whatever it was Winry was saying but it was har - er, difficult!"

Witty lines, I love it! The art was pretty, too~.

Cute fic. ^-^

[evil_little_dog]

Thank you, very much. It was somewhat stressful until I figured out how I wanted to fill bob_fish's prompt, then the story wrote itself. :D Including those lines.