FMA Fic: "Brave New World" 26/?

[evil_little_dog]

Title: Difference
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Author: evil_little_dog
Characters: Riza, Roy, Ed, Al and Winry
Words: 282
Rating: K+
Summary: Riza voices a realization to Roy regarding the brothers.
Warnings: Continuation of “Brave New World”, which crosses over FMA manga with FMA original anime.
Disclaimer: Arakawa absolutely owns all.
fanfic_bakeoff prompt: observe

Comments

[syolen]

Oh, Winry. Winry. Actually, I just want to hug them all tight...

Still loving your 'verse and story! :D

[evil_little_dog]

They all need hugs so much! Poor things.

(mwahahaha.)

[seta_suzume]

Wow! I decided today that it was about time I started reading this fic and I am not disappointed (but aaaah, poor Winry)! I'm looking forward to continuing to follow this in the future.

[evil_little_dog]

Yay, I've coerced another follower!

I mean, yay, you've given my story a chance! And you're enjoying it! :D I'm glad I didn't disappoint you with my idea!

[seta_suzume]

Is it fun to write the story in (mostly) small pieces? It's an interesting format.

I've been reading a lot of fanfic lately, so I'm getting into (and through) a bunch of things I'd be wanting to get to sooner or later.

[evil_little_dog]

It's different. I mean, I don't really have a chance to get bored with anyone's POV, since I'm only in it for a short time, however, I've got people following the story on FFN who complain regularly that the chapters are too short.

I'm glad you're having the time to read. I do, too; I just keep looking for stories that don't exist. And then wind up needing to write them.

[yuukihikari]

God your story is miserable and I luff it. Winry makes me so sad XD;;; and at some point the worlds have to be set right.... Sader sad story.

Hugs all around.

[evil_little_dog]

I love writing angst, what can I say?

Winry is a strong young woman, but she's suffered quite a few heartbreaks. Hopefully, Ed and Al will be able to figure out a way to fix some of them.

[adoxerella]

I agree with the consensus that they all need hugs badly.

I am still loving this series. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

[evil_little_dog]

Hugs would probably help, a lot.

[r_kimono]

(I had to go back and look at the last part of this series, as I couldn't remember if I had read - much less reviewed! - it.)

In order:

Or maybe both Mustang and Hawkeye are right. (I wonder what Ed and Winry were talking about, to make him grin so?)

Yes, yes, Al, figure out a way to leave this Winry happy, too. Please?

Oh, Pinako. Nothing gets past her! (And what a weird conversation they must have had off-screen to explain things.)

Love Al thinking he'd have to hit Ed if the latter didn't say anything more substantial to their Winry before leaving. I notice Winry didn't answer Ed's question about *if* she wants them to come back - hmmm... And can I say 'poor Winry' again?

[evil_little_dog]

Mustang and Hawkeye could both be right, yes. :D And probably are.

Al wants to figure out a way, indeed!

Pinako is taking this with her usual grace. Fortunately.

Al thinks his brother's an idiot (and would probably have words with this world's Ed, too).