FMA Fic: "Brave New World" 25/?

[evil_little_dog]

Title: Brave New World - Dress Up
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Author: evil_little_dog
Characters: Ed POV, mentions of Al, Winry and Roy
Words: 497
Rating: Gen
Summary: Ed's not sure about his new clothes.
Warnings: Same warnings still apply: Crossover between original anime/manga; part of a larger story.
Disclaimer: So very not mine.

Part One:

Comments

[dreamer1789]

Alright, a nice big update!
Loving you for fleshing out the whole Roy/Riza situation and what could have possibly motivated Mustang to make such a move, because it just wasn't explain in the movie and didn't make any sense. This whole sort of spiritual quest because of Hawkeye and the situation is more to my liking then just because of Ed being gone. ^^
(Does make one wonder why no one tried to kill or imprison him for killing the Fuhrer. It's not like they had any proof and Mrs. Bradley in her ignorance can't have been fond of Roy, because in her eyes he would be the catalyst for the tragedy that befell her lil family.)
So, anyway, cheers for Riza trying to mend the gap.

The smug expression on Al’s face made Ed remember his little brother beaming as he got his big brother in trouble with Mom. This. Just a small line, but so rich in character detail. ♥

[evil_little_dog]

I wrote something recently from Roy's POV for fma_fic_contest that sort of inspired the whole Roy/Riza thing for this story, so I ought to include it as a "part and parcel" for the series.

Was Mrs. Bradley even aware that Roy did it? I remember Selim being there, and Archer, as for the rest....

That line more or less came from something I said to cornerofmadness the other day, that Ed got blamed for a lot of stuff Al did - and Al didn't bother to correct the blame. :D

[r_kimono]

Oh, Ed. I like that he's recognizing when they've reminded Winry of her Elrics. It's a virtual minefield for them. Lol at wanting someone with depth perception to drive.

Hmmm, once again I wonder how long the Mustang-Rockbell secret will last, especially now that Ed's curiosity has been piqued...

Go Riza!!

When put like that, it sounded very self-indulgent.
*deadpan* No, really? Oh, Roy, such a wrong-headed line of reasoning there. And Ed, you truly don't know the half of it!

Still enjoying this! ^_^

[evil_little_dog]

THERE ARE SO MANY TRIPWIRES IN THIS UNIVERSE. And Ed and Al will probably blunder through all of them. Just imagine the explosions when everything comes out....

...or something. :D

[ishte]

Yay!

I also loved this line: The smug expression on Al’s face made Ed remember his little brother beaming as he got his big brother in trouble with Mom.

but this one I especially loved from Ed: "I need a tutorial to get through all these differences."

[evil_little_dog]

This set has a lot of people enjoying the lines! :D

[evil_little_dog]

We shall see what happens with everyone in Rezembool! :D