FMA fic: "Similarities" (anyone can read)

[evil_little_dog]

S J Smith

Fandom:  Fullmetal Alchemist

Pairing and/or character:  Ed/Winry (one-sided, at this point)

Rating:  K + (?  I hate ratings....)

Disclaimer:  I’m writing fanfic, therefore, I’m not, okay?

Summary:  Information isn’t easy to come by in Rush Valley (consider this a prequel to Clandestine).

Warnings:  N/A; if you’ve

Comments

[cornerofmadness]

i see the ending stood fast. I still like it lots

[evil_little_dog]

I changed the language just a little but yeah, it did.

[evil_little_dog]

Whee. I can do with that sort of ego-boo. *grins*

..which just proves I can be as awful to Winry as I can to Ed, I guess.

[evil_little_dog]

I get girlfriends! And a boyfriend! - Al, beaming

[terracottabones]

Gah! Suspense and angst at the same time areyoucrazy?!?!?! ...okay, so it was a wonderful piece of work, but now I'm on the edge of my seat. *sigh* Am very jittery right now with the goodliness. I love Winry's steadfastness - but even better is her subtle, hidden...hysteria? That's not the word for it - it's worry, but really strong. Excellent characterization.

[evil_little_dog]

Concern? Is concern the word you're looking for? *grins*

Suspense for the first story, angst for the second, let's see how I can round out the third. *grins evilly*

I love writing Winry, I really, really do.

*hint - I love reading Winry, too.*

[terracottabones]

Of course. Concern is exactly it.

And there's gonna be a third!! Yay! If it were a baby, I would have a shower. Since it isn't, I'll just squeal. *squeal!!!*

Oh yeah, and...are you in any way implying that I should get off my so-called lazy butt and write some fanfiction? *blink blink* Well my response to that is - ASSOONASWINTERBREAKISOVERIAMSITTINGDOWNATTHISHERECOMPUTERANDWRITINGAFRIGGINBOOK!!!! BLAAAAHHH! Funny how I have to wait until after winter break (or just about) to do anything I want. I'm just about to go mulitple personality on myself - then half of me will write fanfiction all day and the other half will do her civic duty and go to school.

But of course, if that wasn't your implication, then nevermind. Lol. ^__^

[evil_little_dog]

There should actually be five in the series - do you now really want to hold the shower? *laugh* It's just finding the time to write those in between working on original fic and M.T. and my 7stages claim and....

Yes, that was a hint. It was. Really. And oooo, for being able to write at school. I usually drew. Writing meant that my concentration was divided too much and if the teacher asked questions, I could be in trouble....

[terracottabones]

Oh yeah...I just saw that you said "prequel" instead of "sequel." So ixnay on the uspense-say.

[evil_little_dog]

*giggles* at you.

[inane_nana]

Ow Daaarling! Oh the humanity! I had to go back and read over Clandestine for the full effect of the fic to hit me in the face like a hot soggy towel. Oh. Man. How do you pull off multi-parter angst, I shall never know. You can molest Ed all you want but ya can't harm my Winry, darnit. *elaborates cunning plan to get her to safety*

Still, I love your solid characterization and the end was really well-done. No resolution for poor Winry, eh?

[evil_little_dog]

You can molest Ed all you want

Oooo, someone's giving me permission! *rubs hands together gleefully*

And Ed will tell you I'm an equal opportunity writer when it comes to angst. He's not the only one who gets hit with these things, after all.

No resolution for Winry yet, no. I've three more stories to write. Maybe at the end of the fourth, there'll be something. *grins*