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Fic: Borrowed Time (4/??)

Nov 12, 2007 08:50

Fic: Borrowed Time, Part Four
Author: evil_is_pretty
Series: Sequel to All My Sins Remember'd
Pairing: Ensemble, Mylar
Spoilers: Season one, and mixed season two.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A reunion.
Notes: Poor forsquilis ... If I didn't post this part now, I may have ended up forcing her to read back through it about a bajillion more time...

Borrowed Time - Part One

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Comments 35

sylar_ismyhero November 12 2007, 16:41:57 UTC

I don't have the words to tell you how much I am loving this fic! It's going to help me through the writer's strike for sure. You are GREAT!

evil_is_pretty November 13 2007, 20:13:04 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it!

We may need lots of fic to get us through the strike. :/

flwrpwr_vampyre November 12 2007, 17:50:57 UTC

Aww The end just made me melt. Thanks to you I'm now a big soppy puddle on the floor.
This is so good!

evil_is_pretty November 13 2007, 20:13:47 UTC

LOL I'll take that as a good thing!

Thanks so much for commenting!!

kalikahuntress November 12 2007, 17:56:40 UTC

Oh wow, umm, between re-reading the kissing scene a couple times and that icon, the brain is done. Just wow, I almost forgot how much these two connected and had chemistry from their first scenes. And this fic really brings that all back for me, thanks for this fic, it's been getting me through my Sylinder and Petrelli withdrawal.

evil_is_pretty November 13 2007, 20:28:25 UTC

Awww! I'm glad to hear you liked the kiss scene. :) I only reworked it about fifteen times! LOL I didn't want it to be too much too soon, but neither did I want to skimp. Very frustrating! :P

I go back and watch all of the Mylar scenes and just think to myself "Yes, this is what season two is missing!" Seriously, between Mohinder and Sylar, and Peter and Nathan, those pairings just stole the scenery in season one!

levitatethis November 12 2007, 18:14:10 UTC

I really enjoyed this! All the conversations felt real, like I could hear those words being spoken by the characters. And the Mohinder/Zane(Gabriel) conversation is excellent.
Great job!

evil_is_pretty November 13 2007, 20:28:55 UTC

Thank you so much for saying so!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!

greyelveneyes November 12 2007, 20:15:12 UTC

As the door slams shut, Mohinder spins around, dark eyes angry. “What in the hell did you set out to accomplish here, Peter? Did you get what you wanted?”

That line keeps playing in my head like an intense scene, and I LOVE it completely.

ZaneGabrielSylar/Mohinder conversation was so amazing, and I think it's such an incredible touch that when the POV is a different character, they view SylarGabrielZane with a different name. It's so telling of each person.

LOVE this.

evil_is_pretty November 13 2007, 20:31:28 UTC

That line keeps playing in my head like an intense scene, and I LOVE it completely.

*G* Yeah, that one kind of got added in, and it was like Mohinder was just so aghast at why Peter would do such a thing when he's been working so hard to make things okay!

And thank you very much!! I've been wrestling with the different POV's because I haven't wanted it to get confusing. At the same time, all I can think is how confused poor ZaneGabrielSylar must be. :(

Thanks for both reading and commenting!